Reviews for Cracks
JoHnLoCkHoNk chapter 2 . 9/23/2013
O . O
I love you...
Maja chapter 2 . 12/19/2012
wow. just wow. :D
Kitty O chapter 2 . 6/20/2011
Geez, there's a lump in my throat and tears in my eyes. That never happens over fanfictions with me! Never!


So sad.

hey, when did you add this chapter anyway?

Not nice. Not nice at all. This is terrible. So well written but man! sad.

You killed my merlin. How dare you? I like the ending in Broken better...
Kitty O chapter 1 . 3/10/2011
Merlin, nothing gets better by killing yourself. Ive read enough suicidal!Merlin to see it coming, of course, but that grin is CREEPY. And I can't even see it.

Heavens, Merlin, if you wanted to make him feel bad, it worked! (Oh and I can totally understand wanting to make him feel bad by the way)

THis was very powerful!
rawr52 chapter 1 . 12/29/2010
:( Moving... Really good though :)
Yellow22 chapter 1 . 12/28/2010
Jack12 chapter 1 . 12/20/2010
wow that was amazing. It was intense and you could feel the pain and it made you want to cry, but it was beautifully written. Thanks for posting it!
LovesAngst chapter 1 . 12/18/2010
Well, THAT was intense! I'd love a follow up from Arthur's point of view

Midnight Dancer chapter 1 . 12/17/2010
All I can say to that is WOW. Arthur realised just that moment too late to save the one person who meant so much. Very powerful and well done
TheRandomOneStaringAtYou chapter 1 . 12/17/2010
woah! this is really good. it's a bit strange to have it in second person but it somehow worked! well done! favouriting this me thinks.. :) xx
ruby890 chapter 1 . 12/16/2010
great. sad.
Setting Things on Fire chapter 1 . 12/16/2010
This was a very touching piece, especially nearing the finish. Beautifully written.
ehar21 chapter 1 . 12/16/2010
Holy... wow. That. was. AMAZING! They way you planted yourself in Merlin's shoes made it really sound like it was coming from him. Have a pie!
ChloeIsMe chapter 1 . 12/16/2010
Awww D: Can't believe you killed off Merlin. How dare you? Why? WHYYYY? Ahem, anyway, I liked it~! Quite sad, pretty angsty and I felt like crying a little over how broken Merlin seemed :'( Anyway, well done Miss. Rain