Reviews for Leave of Absence
ruby890 chapter 16 . 1/7/2011
alls well that ends done.
Dark Horse Writer chapter 16 . 12/31/2010
**Gives a round of applause**

This was a fun series to read, and at times I was wondering what was going to happen next. But the ending was great and I read the Christmas epilogue before this (whoops), but still made a lot of sense.

And thanks for the mention.
Dark Horse Writer chapter 15 . 12/30/2010
All will be forgiven soon.

There is one part in here where it was a tad bit confusing: Veronica was also giving a piece of her mind to Veronica

That doesn't flow well.

But other than that good chapter.
ruby890 chapter 14 . 12/29/2010
wow that was sweet.
Dark Horse Writer chapter 14 . 12/29/2010
This is a really good story, and the bracelet even though it meant a lot to's better than forgetting everyone you love at the time (that is what I thought the price was at the begginning of the story). So, I am rather happy. Though, I'm not sure about Becky...
ruby890 chapter 12 . 12/29/2010
yay go becky. she saved the day.
Dark Horse Writer chapter 13 . 12/28/2010
Well, at least Balthazar is back in action...

But oh Dave is going to cry to see his Tesla project has faded to dust...

Now the explanations come...
Dark Horse Writer chapter 12 . 12/27/2010
A bracelet for a ring?

Well, I thought it would be Balthazar would have to give up his previous life for that one ring...a bracelet seems so little for something that is so...big

Nice chapter by the way.
Dark Horse Writer chapter 11 . 12/26/2010
Well, this really turns things upside down doesn't it?
ruby890 chapter 11 . 12/26/2010
that was great. evil prime .
ruby890 chapter 10 . 12/26/2010
well that was news. love the fic.
Dark Horse Writer chapter 10 . 12/25/2010
Merry Christmas!

Anyways, that is a really interesting chapter and Heather, she's being stubborn. Like Dave would give up magic...
Dark Horse Writer chapter 9 . 12/24/2010
Well it is good that Dave has the dragon ring back, now only if Balthazar can get his ring made and come back to the states with Becky in tow then everything will be fine...oh and Eriam and Horvath dead too.
Dark Horse Writer chapter 8 . 12/23/2010
Well...that was certainly not what I expected for the smithie to be.

Good job by the way.
ruby890 chapter 8 . 12/23/2010
that chapter was funny. with the drunken lady in all. very nice.
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