Reviews for Crushing
ColoradanCowgirl chapter 3 . 4/2/2015
Don't get too mushy (that changes my good opinion of the characters) buy please try writing more.
ColoradanCowgirl chapter 1 . 4/2/2015
The cat coulda been somethin' like:
"Ali'i"-Hawaiian Royalty
"Ho'okupu"-Gift From the Land
Maybe one of these shortened. I guess it's a little late now, though, huh?
Guest chapter 3 . 9/21/2014
Multifandomgirl2 chapter 3 . 8/17/2013
renee chapter 3 . 11/24/2012
please write another chapter
Guest chapter 3 . 11/1/2012
R&r idk im bored update
Guest chapter 3 . 7/5/2012
this is a great story i love it do you think you could write more chapters
Mississippicowfirl chapter 3 . 6/25/2012
I think this is great. (even her throwing up. Nice touch!) I was thinking, maybe swine would co-share an account with me? I would write PS, PS: WHI, Winnie the Horse Gentler, and the Unicorn Chronicles. I would have to use your account, not the other way around if this works out. I am not pushy or bossy. No foul language or anything immodest, good speller, and any one who MIGHT be interested can just reply through these reviews. Thanks! (oh, partial credit goes to you, and GREAT work on the story:D)
No1 chapter 3 . 5/14/2011
Hey plz rite more not many ppl rite this good u hav a gift
swamp13 chapter 3 . 1/2/2011
ooo can't wait to find out more (:
swamp13 chapter 2 . 12/25/2010
please update! (:
Exmoorpony chapter 2 . 12/24/2010
Great story so far! Please continue! Your writing style is a lot the same as the way the original books are done. I own a lot of them.

Maybe you could have called the cat Leia. That's kinda tropical, like from Hawaii.

Maybe rerate it Teen though. Darby does get into a lot of trouble. Cade too. And in times of trouble, steam can break. If you know what I mean.