|Reviews for Mousefur's secret|
| Queen Songheart chapter 1 . 12/5/2015
Ooh yes! I always shipped Mouse x Long!
So cute together.
Keep it up
| Ruffled Crow's Feather chapter 1 . 10/31/2015
T h a t. I s. A. C o o l. y.
e. e. S o o n
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/17/2013
not would probaley be grumpier also would get mad at mousefur for having a kit when shes so old!
| Whisperspirit chapter 1 . 5/10/2013
| syd chapter 1 . 2/26/2013
i loved it! but how did mousefur get pregneat
| Deven chapter 1 . 12/31/2012
Nice story but, MouseFur died form a darfforest Tom cat.
| Kendra chapter 1 . 11/17/2012
Awesome sauce only Mousefur was kinda old to have kits :) but I like it
| ur mom chapter 1 . 8/22/2012
ewww, thornclaw is a fucking gandpa...
| Random chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
This weirded me out a little. Mousefur was an elder when longtail went blind so shes way older than him. Great story tho...
| Crowfeather's girl chapter 1 . 11/20/2011
Alright, I have already written the sequel. Just look it up under Thronclaw, its called The Heart Of a Thorn
| WyldClaw chapter 1 . 10/19/2011
| Tallstar07 chapter 1 . 9/7/2011
that was a good story, please, please...write more!
| youfar chapter 1 . 6/24/2011
you are a butt
| Splashpelt of RiverClan chapter 1 . 5/9/2011
That was incredible! You're definetly going to become a writer! Can you put Spashpelt in? Pleeeeez
| AwesomeOtulissa chapter 1 . 1/15/2011
You should write a fanfic about Ashheart and Thornclaw! I'd totally read it! :)