Reviews for Mousefur's secret
Guest chapter 1 . 8/17/2013
not would probaley be grumpier also would get mad at mousefur for having a kit when shes so old!
Whisperspirit chapter 1 . 5/10/2013
Very creative!
Love it!
syd chapter 1 . 2/26/2013
i loved it! but how did mousefur get pregneat
Deven chapter 1 . 12/31/2012
Nice story but, MouseFur died form a darfforest Tom cat.
Kendra chapter 1 . 11/17/2012
Awesome sauce only Mousefur was kinda old to have kits :) but I like it
ur mom chapter 1 . 8/22/2012
ewww, thornclaw is a fucking gandpa...
Random chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
This weirded me out a little. Mousefur was an elder when longtail went blind so shes way older than him. Great story tho...
Crowfeather's girl chapter 1 . 11/20/2011
Alright, I have already written the sequel. Just look it up under Thronclaw, its called The Heart Of a Thorn
WyldClaw chapter 1 . 10/19/2011
oh wow!
Tallstar07 chapter 1 . 9/7/2011
that was a good story, please, please...write more!
youfar chapter 1 . 6/24/2011
you are a butt
Splashpelt of RiverClan chapter 1 . 5/9/2011
That was incredible! You're definetly going to become a writer! Can you put Spashpelt in? Pleeeeez
AwesomeOtulissa chapter 1 . 1/15/2011
You should write a fanfic about Ashheart and Thornclaw! I'd totally read it! :)
stonestream chapter 1 . 1/9/2011
good story plz update soon