Reviews for Jar of Hearts
Guest chapter 1 . 2/15/2013
Please update! :)
Guest chapter 1 . 12/10/2012
If this isn't updated I may die. Please. I'm begging you. Please, please, please.
sundance1989 chapter 1 . 6/7/2012
please update this story its good so far and i gotta know what happens next :)
3 chapter 1 . 5/1/2011
Great story :) very enjoyable to read :)
TsukiRoze chapter 1 . 3/11/2011
Please update this fic.
iHeartsYou chapter 1 . 3/8/2011
This story is amazing! You have to update! I'm glad that this isn't one of those stories that go like "Generic Mary-Sue moves to Castle Rock. Generic Mary-Sue meets Ace and it's love at first sight. Ace acts OOC and proclaims his undying love for Generic Mary-Sue then ditches the Cobras to spend every single minute with her. Generic Mary-Sue and Ace get married, have one or more perfect kids and live a happy perfect life. The End." or "Overly beautiful girl is abused so that no one thinks she's a mary-sue. One day she runs away from home and Ace, who has never ever noticed her, suddenly looks at her and falls in love even though she stills looks as same as before. They start dating and he tells her that she's the light to his life and that he would die without her and just acts OOC. She starts crying suddenly because of the abuse and Ace acts OOC again and tells her everything will be okay and that he loves her and that they'll be together forever. Overly beautiful girl's OMG!Mother suddenly appears and it turns out her mother is a famous model/actress/just generally rich person! OMG! Then mom is like "come live with me!" and overly beautiful girl asks if Ace can come and Ace proposes and OMG!They all live happily ever after!" Getting back to the story, it's really good aand I hope you update soon!
AlexA chapter 1 . 2/15/2011
One of the best Cobra stories I have seen on here. You did a great job with all of the characters. Write more please? :D
SunlitMercy chapter 1 . 1/13/2011
I command you to update this or I WILL MAKE EVERY KIEFER SUTHERLAND CHARACTER nom nom nom you until you are no more! lol jk but seriously update this please!
HermioneandMarcus chapter 1 . 12/29/2010
excellent first chapter and i can not wait to read more of it as soon as you can write it please and thank you
SassyButSweet chapter 1 . 12/25/2010
This sounds really interesting :) I can't wait to read more!
Hollywood Angel chapter 1 . 12/20/2010
This is a really good story, i like how you have kept the cobra's true to there charecters. i hope you continue with this story as i would love to read more :)
Hcorby01 chapter 1 . 12/17/2010
This is excellent so far, please continue! And I hope Ace has a change of heart :)
xXxRadioactivexXx chapter 1 . 12/17/2010
Cool, this is really good, you should continue.