|Reviews for Zero Tango|
| Wednesday's Jest chapter 1 . 4/7
This is far too old for me to entertain any hope of an update, but the premise is entertaining. Lelouch and his plans are at the heart of so many tragedies after all. In a world where there are few who could match him? Disaster.
| KainVixenheim chapter 1 . 11/11/2014
I really like it, I am really looking forward to the next chapter (cos if there isn't you will get flamed)
| xxxrae97xxx chapter 1 . 11/5/2014
Man this had a shitton of potential, tough luck you left it unfinished...
| JIMIRMA chapter 1 . 9/15/2014
Really good. It's somewhat fun seeing Lelouch as both the bad guy and the good guy at once. Somehow I see him messing and manipulating his dear Master for all it's worth. After all he is only nice to the small few people he actually cares for and the rest are useful pawns and tools.
| MadRaving chapter 1 . 8/13/2014
My only complaint is that by all rights Lelouch should have SOME measure of pride, if only a little bit. Though, I guess having some angry, inferiority-complex pinkette pretending to be a princess is a fair alternative to death in his eyes, especially considering how experienced he is at dealing with annoyances(Tamaki). Other than that, I really do like this... Though I can't help but wonder... what effect would the presence of the Gandalfr rune have on Lelouch's Code? Or vise versa Also, Back-From-The-Dead stories are a huge thing for me, I love them. I mean, death by all rights should change a person. Fresh start and all, and since Lulu had...well, everything, and nothing, he really just wants what's interesting now, huh? Well, that and pizza. Much like C.C., as you had Lelouch say in the story. I really think you should have had him in the Zero outfit, though you could put that in a bloopers/omake thing, where he arrives as, and introduces himself as, Zero. Oooh, if I write that up and submit it, is there a chance you would put that in the story if you continue it? As a blooper, of course.
| Destrark chapter 1 . 7/9/2014
Oh you poor people. Louise the Void Mage with Lelouch Vi Britannia, Zero and 1st and only Emperor of the World as her familiar? possibly with his Geass and definitely with Immortality? oh dear, you poor sons of bitches. :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/22/2014
I know it's been a thousand years, but please write more!
| corlion chapter 1 . 2/4/2014
no words can describe the elation you have given me. I love both of thees anime/books and the combination of them is mind blowing, hop to see more.
| dragontear365 chapter 1 . 12/12/2013
You need to write more or i will be very unhappy with you
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/1/2013
A recurring theme in this snippet it seems is Lelouch being a pedophile.
| Pandaemic chapter 1 . 11/24/2013
great story please make more
| Lord Joyde chapter 1 . 10/19/2013
Please, I beg of you on behalf of the FF community, GIVE US MOAR CHAPTERS!
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/7/2013
ordinarys vs magicians
| Caimthehero chapter 1 . 7/6/2013
Ok it is an interesting premise but if everyone is going to stay in character then this will be absolutely epic. Then again any story that stars Lelouch has a good chance of that. You started off all right with Lelouch. Normally I would say that he wouldn't brook disrespect from Louise but as of right now he has no knowledge of this world so he could be biding his time before he begins playing his game. There should be a gigantic conflict in the future between Lelouch and Louise. Lelouch is a master manipulator with a large amount of pride while Louise isn't intelligent enough to match him. Having him be subservient to her for longer than a week would be extreme OOC on his part.
What I'm really looking forward to is the revolution. This story is primed with Zero starting his righteous fight for freedom. Lelouch would never stand by in a world where the weak (commoners) are oppressed by the strong (nobles). The only real question is how would you make this a challenge for Lelouch. You showed that he has a code so now his enemies have to deal with an immortal, who can cause insanity with a touch, who can give geass to all of his minions should he choose, who is charismatic enough to rally an army, who can command that army with superb efficiency with his intelligence, and then you gave him Gandalfr runes. You just gave him enough power to hold an army of I believe one hundred thousand, BY HIMSELF. To say Lelouch has reached godsue might be an understatement. He has virtually no true weaknesses anymore. You are going to have to ramp up the tristain army if you hope to create any tension. If I offer my humble opinion have Lelouch get close to a commoner and start taking hostages because that is the only way anyone could stop him now.
| NIghtwing chapter 1 . 5/14/2013
i'd love to see where this story might end up. please continue it.