Reviews for Pray
Silver Shihouin chapter 1 . 10/21/2012
damn hes too clever for his own good
lmfao
silver
Alpha Wolfess chapter 1 . 9/3/2012
Aw that ending was so incredibly cute! I liked the way the story led to the ending and your writing skills are very good. A few grammatical errors here and there but not enough to ruin the cuteness of this story. Well done :)
mscalliope chapter 1 . 8/26/2012
ROFL ... just rofl I can totally imagine him doing that. Good job.
Unseen Watcher chapter 1 . 5/19/2012
Aww. That's /so/ him. heh. She'll probably smack him but I hope there's a hug in there too. Sweet.
NeverWillBe chapter 1 . 1/31/2011
This fic lacks drama and interesting plot.

BUT! It was good story-writing. The "capture the moment" style is one of my personal favourites and I've been waiting to find a Shunsui/Nanao one in this form for a while.

The humour bit at the end was fun to read and sometimes I believe it is quite necessary when you're writing about Kyouraku.

Good job.
EchoLoco chapter 1 . 12/23/2010
Nice mix of heart-warming and hilarious.
JenovaJuice97 chapter 1 . 12/18/2010
That's funny and horrible at the same time shame on Shunsui.
Snowkid chapter 1 . 12/17/2010
whahaha and thats when you heard a loud *thwack* and a moaning shunsui. xD brilliant!