|Reviews for The Wedding Night|
| Guest chapter 3 . 11/30/2016
Not at all what I was expecting. Didn't really like it.
| SL10 chapter 3 . 10/18/2016
It's a shame you didn't get to enjoy writing this as much as when it began, I've had the same disenchantment with stories before and... it's just not pretty.
All the same you put a nice bow on it all with this ending so I can't say anything negative. Well done.
| Inudaughter Returns chapter 3 . 4/19/2016
There is beautiful truth wrapped inside this tale.
| Inudaughter Returns chapter 1 . 4/19/2016
i am liking the uniqueness of this story already. Romantic pressure and being pressured for romance are to separate things and I salute you.
| DeepVoice'06 chapter 3 . 10/26/2014
A little rushed ending but still a good story. I love the strip poker scenes and how they are so nervous around each other. So typical how Arnold would want to save Helga for marriage. :)
| Tess chapter 2 . 6/21/2014
OMYGOD THIS FANFIC HAD ME INWARDLY SCREAMING LIKE AN IDIOT gah it is too hot too handle i'm practically red right now gad!
| Kpfan72491 chapter 3 . 6/19/2014
| Babyjokerkc48 chapter 2 . 5/27/2014
Very interesting story but the chapters are too long, you have too remember that ever chapter is one whole page and since yours are very long, some poeople might not be able to finish the whole thing and it will be really hard for them to pick up where they left off, I'm not saying that you should shorten your story or something, I'm just saying you should split up your chapters about 3 ways before you upload them.
| JupiterSun11 chapter 3 . 4/18/2014
Honestly, I love the way you finished it. It suits the characters in the best way. Including Helga. It was a perfect ending, it ended in your style. Which is why I like your other stories because your style of writing flows well, not just in language. You have produced such cute, feel-good fluffy fictions that I enjoying reading when I should be doing my homework. And they are all in character.
And nobody is forcing you to create such lovely stories, you choose to use your free time. I applaud you! You are very talented writer, even if it's just writing fictions.
I'm sure nobody is asking for a sequel to Fifty Shades of Grey, Hey Arnold style anyway. Ha ha.
| Guest chapter 2 . 4/7/2014
This has got to be the most ridiculous fic I've ever read. They both sound like a pair of idiotic prudes that just graduated from some religious boarding school.
| Guest chapter 3 . 4/6/2014
I don't get it. They didn't go all the way?
I feel cheated for some reason
| BettyAwesome715 chapter 3 . 4/7/2014
Are you kidding i loved it!
This was a way better ending, it have me enough closure and that's all I could ask for(:
thank you for updating this and not forgetting about us(:
Very much appreciated
| heyarnoldforeverandever chapter 3 . 4/7/2014
I think it was very sweet. Good job
| ForeverA90'sKid chapter 3 . 4/6/2014
You're being a little hard on yourself, that little tidbit was, in all sincerity, great and I think you patched things up nicely. :) So hey, don't stress! You managed to bring a smile to my face and it would be unfair of anyone to ask more of you when you're uncomfortable in doing so. But thank you for giving it a try though, I honestly liked it. :) And thank you for giving it an ending! I'm glad that you strive to finish your works.
| serendipityrain711 chapter 3 . 4/6/2014
Aww jenna we know your style is more for the 10 year old arnold and helga but you still gave a beautiful epilogue to their "afterglow". How you described their first night together was very sweet . I dont need the most intimate details when reading your stories to picture the amazing love between them. Just reading them being tender
and romantic to each other is all i need and you are the expert when it comes to them. So anyway i did enjoy it. :)