|Reviews for Drown|
| Foreword chapter 10 . 2/18/2011
"Speaking of hard –" OMG-are you trying to kill my poor El? Letting him get so close and then...nada! Haven't you ever heard of death by blue balls?
Ok..I'm done now. Nice development. Nice that he thinks of his kids and his responsibilities and then stops. Hmmm, I like that El. grinning
Now I'm really curious to see how you are going to resolve this-you can't torture them forever-or can you? LOL
| The Sarcastic Polar Bear chapter 9 . 2/15/2011
| Little Kakau chapter 9 . 2/15/2011
I want more! what a chapter!
| Foreword chapter 9 . 2/15/2011
Oh no! Poor Olivia is never going to be safe from this nutjob, is she? Elliot should have taken her home with him-he's slipping up. Keep the chapters coming-can't wait to find out what happens.
| 7starfish7 chapter 8 . 2/8/2011
Keeps getting better. I hate Tucker. Update soon!
| Little Kakau chapter 8 . 2/6/2011
Very good! I'm waiting for the next! :)
| justliziam chapter 8 . 2/5/2011
WOW! can't wait to find out what happens next
| Debbie chapter 8 . 2/5/2011
Oh come on Elliot don't let her leave! Ugh plllleeeeaaassseee update! :D
| ColdSurroundings chapter 2 . 2/5/2011
Okay. It's the weekend and I finally had the time to read all of your updates and review this. You are extremely talented and I love this story so far. You pulled me in immediately and you captured the emotions of the characters so well, in my opinion. I'm interested to see where this is going and I hope you have more ideas and updates coming soon. I usually don't have time to read stories because I am so busy writing (and working LOL) but I will make time for this story because it's simply wonderful. Keep it up. I have no critiques so far :) -Kamara aka FanOfYourUnit
| Foreword chapter 8 . 2/4/2011
Talk about a major monkey wrench...poor Liv & El.
| GleeQueen16 chapter 8 . 2/4/2011
aww man i wanna keep readin!
| SilvrBlade chapter 8 . 2/4/2011
AWWWW. 3 Even Big Man himself can't pull them apart! More please! ;3
| SoLetsPlayDoctorBabe chapter 8 . 2/4/2011
omg! she needs to come back! like now!
| SilvrBlade chapter 7 . 2/2/2011
Do the world a HUGE favor and PLEASE UPDATE THIS SOON! :D
| Foreword chapter 7 . 1/25/2011
Uh oh! Busted by big daddy! And that creep is watching them-bet he got an eyeful! Now, when does olivia take care of El?