Man I hope you read this. Your story is the absolute best Sarah Connor Chronicles story I ever read. Hands down. If you're not a professional writer, you should be.
Peace

Oh man it was dramatic and all the right way. I was on the edge of my seat and scared for Sarah Connor. And I like the way John handled things. Why would you try to make an evil person comfortable? putting him out of his misery quickly with a bullet is a mercy

You handled it just right brother. That was in line with how Sarah was on the show.
plus, to me it was still pretty harsh. Sarah was insulting for sure. anyway I'm really enjoying the story. I've been waiting years for a third season and you're doing a great job with this story. well you wrote it many years ago I'm not sure you will even see this.
Thank you

You know what wild. I was thinking hey finally there is a timeline wherr Kyle can maybe go live a happy life and at least live longer or a while. But no, once again he dies young for John Connor. It's like his Destiny and any timeline

I really enjoyed this story. I could be an ass and nitpick a few minor details, but I couldn't do that to an author whose writing has deeply affected me so much. I'd feel bad if I did.

If Kyle is dead, shouldn't John cease to exist? Or did Kyle impregnate Allison with John? Still, if that was the case, John would cease to be John as we know him...

Time Paradoxes... *The more you know..* xDDD

I just finished watching the complete SCC online yesterday. I'm glad I did. You really do the character's justice. Its rare, IMO anyway for a reader to like a character(s) so much that they wish they were real, and for me personally, you make me want someone like Cameron to be real. I don't think I've ever liked the Terminator franchise as much as when I started reading your fanfics, and thats saying something, because its one of my favorite franchises, both entertainment-wise and on a philiosophical level. What you did for me was really cement the idea that peace between humans and machines could realistically happen. You increased my love for the franchise, but also reinforced the hopeless romantic in me. I actually think your work improves upon the terminator series, your work gives it a heart, a heart to a machine, to Cameron.

I once had a dream that I was a survivor of Judgement day, and I had convinced a few rogue terminators to try and get me into Skynet central during wartime to try and broker piece, through mutual understanding and more importantly, through love. I was unsuccessful. I think if I had your help, I would have succeeded, or at least gotten farther in to the compund.

Thank you for this, thank you for your irreplacable, yet deeply needed contribution to this franchise/fandom. From one human being to another, (not romantically obviously, platonically) I love you for your work.

Good to the last Drop!

You earned that vacation with this! I hope it was a good one.

The battle between Cameron and Skynet as exciting as the physical battle on the hangar. A moment of silence for our heroes who didn’t make it

Stop playing so hard with my emotions and nerves. LOL I knew Cameron's little hacking job was going to cause trouble; just not this much

Spectacular finish to a nightmarish future. Weaver may have succeeded in creating the fighting force needed to take down Skynet.

This would have made one incredible movie or season, and you're not even done yet!

Goodbye Sarah! It was a befitting exit for her than wasting away from cancer.

I was pleased that Danny and Knowles had their eyes opened in their final moments.

this story was a good resolution to the canceled series! hope there is room for maybe a sequel to this as well

Obviously, after watching TSCC ending I was really disconsolate... well... I am not anymore :) Your story is a perfect continuation.
I liked how human - android relationship was developped. However I wish the problem of mortality was mentioned. Cameron can live forever and will never age in contrast to John. How would the death of everybody else affect her? Would she finally snap and become next Skynet?
Also, their relationship seems to be a bit toxic. Cameron has no life, literally. How long could it take John to become tired/bored of relationship based entirely on Cameron serving him 24/7? Humans are no robots and I do not find it believable. I do not say they should not be happy but I imagine their relationship to be more difficult.
The story was realistic, harsh and brutal and I expected ending to be more... complex.

Besides that, I really enjoyed reading this.

Great job, man. Excellent story. You did amazing job on characters. You know, all the time that I read it, I was worrying about them. Also the atmosphere of dark future was just fascinating. I liked the way you showed how timelines work. Thank you for this great story. From Belarus with love)