Reviews for One
MistyMix89 chapter 1 . 5/17/2013
This was extremely cute! I really like how you made Touko and Touya's characters come alive here. Wonderful job!
White'sBlacky chapter 1 . 4/5/2013
More! Write more! I lov touya/black/hilbert touko/white/hilda which is chessshipping so I LUV CHESSSHIPPING !
xSakuraRosesx chapter 1 . 7/22/2012
I liked this. :) My favorite line was 'Touya stood in a sea of people. But she was the only one he saw'.
12345 chapter 1 . 5/22/2012
short sharp shiny i love it
xXkatlagXx chapter 1 . 7/22/2011
:) Cute!~ I like the two being battle partners. I like how Touya was totally entranced by Touko. Great story! _
turle chapter 1 . 6/25/2011
This story was good
it's simply me chapter 1 . 5/28/2011
awesome! i was wondering when I'd read something about the battle subway! That's one event I'm looking forward to!
anomynous chapter 1 . 4/24/2011
I've done Battle Subway before (and have my partner focus on offense), and the partner's Pokémon can seriously kick some donkey.
KeytoDestiny chapter 1 . 4/6/2011
I really did wish the games went back to Ruby/Sapphire/Emerald's style. Like, where the gender you didn't chose ends up as the rival. I love shipping off the two. X3

I always love these kind of connections, where you just notice someone and it's a beginning of a love... Black spotting White in the middle of it all is awesome. :'D

The game should've made the conversation like yours. It's soo much cuter and, I'd say, realistic. The game portrayed as it a "Hi! Let's go battle together! :'DDD" and then walk off, battle, say bye, and that's it. Boring as hell. T_T

Haha, anyways, adorable oneshot! :'DD
Ryuka-Raion chapter 1 . 2/19/2011
Aww, this was so cute! *faves*
Jnnfr chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
I absolutely loved this, its so cute and well written
aestheticisms chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
I just squee'd. This is so adorable, I love it, BECAUSE IT'S ACTUALLY CANON.

(which speaks for more than I can say. All my stuff can't be canon because it's not in the subway. *pouts*)


HanaIchi Ikari chapter 1 . 12/17/2010
Hyuuuu~~~ Love it! Even though I have no idea where this Shipping is from! xDD