|Reviews for Of Diamonds and Dreams|
| LovelySocks chapter 1 . 11/10/2012
Ooh! That was definitely a refreshing view on the always optimistic, unique Luna. Maybe it hurts just a little more than she lets on. Great job balancing things like bold and italics with normal writing, it was emphasized but not distracting. I love this one!
| SereneMayhem chapter 10 . 9/15/2012
You write amazing freeverse. I love this :)
| Skandar-Loves-Redvines chapter 6 . 3/27/2011
What is this blasphemy?
Pfft, fine. At least they broke up... /
My favorite part was- wait, I dunno what to post here. Because I doubt you want your whole chapter copy&pasted into a review. Er...
Oh! Here we go, my /absolute/ favorite:
"Do you know how hearts break, child?
Just like pretty stars in the sky,
Do you know how they die?
It's all the same, love"
'Twas beautiful, darling.
Don't forget, the only reason that I'm allowing this is because he breaks up with her.
[fail - I actually spelt my own name incorrectly]
| jesslovessmiles chapter 6 . 3/27/2011
Wow. I thought it was really good writing :)
| chasingafterstarlight chapter 5 . 3/27/2011
YOU WRITE MOLLYLYSANDER? /dies
I've been told I'm one of the biggest Mollysander shippers, so when I saw that of the pairings, I had to read it. And then I read this and it was amazing but so sad.
LOVE IT. LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT.
| nico di angelos chapter 5 . 3/1/2011
Aw Moll. Heartbreak's a b*tch, huh?
| nico di angelos chapter 4 . 3/1/2011
I don't like this pairing but I do like this story because it shows how much Vic loves him.
| nico di angelos chapter 3 . 3/1/2011
I was planning on reviewing at the end but I couldn't help myself.
I love that they have flaws (poor baby werewolf)[poor little trainwreck] but it makes them whole. And Lily Lorcan was slipped in! Hizzah.
P. S. Why was Dominique crying?
| am3liapond chapter 5 . 1/26/2011
Ugh. Tears, why are you all over my face? Seriously. If I had to sum it up in a word: amazing.
There's something about the way you write that reminds me of the film Tangled. Not sure why.
You write so beautifully.
| am3liapond chapter 4 . 1/26/2011
Wow wow wow. Everything, from the metaphors, to the language you used, from the first to the last word was perfect. No joke. Best Lily/Teddy free verse I've ever read.
It's soso wrong
To feel this way about a child
She's twelve, for Christ's sake!
But she's blossoming in a way your precious Vicky never did
Tumbling, overflowing with life and vitality
And that mischievous gleam in her eye
Makes you love her more
Victoire knows, of course
She's always known, really
Because you're the wild boy
With the blue blue hair
And her blond locks
Are to meek against the exciting life you want to live
So she pretends everything's okay
Because she can't rewrite her happily ever after
And she doesn't want you to leave
Because she loves you, okay
And she's always been there and will always be there
And what the hell are you thinking,
running off with some child,
let alone her freaking cousin?
So there's screaming
But she loves you enough
To let you go
And you run straight to Lily
Because all paths
Lead back to Lily
Sorry for the humongosaurous hunk of text I copied, but I couldn't pick a bit I liked most, so I pasted half of it. I would've added the first half, too.
Did I mention how perfect this was?
| roslintower chapter 4 . 1/26/2011
So sad...I love the ending, though.
| Skandar-Loves-Redvines chapter 5 . 1/25/2011
I cannot express in words how muc this.
If I had to tell you what my favorite part was, I'd have to copy and paste the whole thing in. My absoluteabsolute favorite is probably, "And he did come,
But his armor was rusty
And his song was off key" though.
Can you do me a favor, and just quit writing? The excellence of your writing depresses me.
| merdarkandtwisty chapter 5 . 1/25/2011
I can really relate to poor molly in this one really good.
| Skandar-Loves-Redvines chapter 4 . 1/25/2011
I'm not the hugest fan of LilyTeddy, but I really loved this one.
I loved your description of Victoire, and how she had everything planned out in life (especially that mention of Teddy "And you're an integral part of her future, you know").
And the metaphors were gorgeous, too. "What if you want to step away from the airbrushed perfection, and move closer to the wildflowers?" I lovelovelove () that line.
As always, this story was absolutely amazing. Can I hear an "awesomesauce"?
| merdarkandtwisty chapter 4 . 1/25/2011
love it perfect my fav next gen pairing.