Reviews for Of Diamonds and Dreams
Guest chapter 10 . 1/5
No.
Impossible.
Impossible, but happening.
No.
I can't.
But I can't help it.
No.
I'll be the /l/i/a/r/.
Or rejected.
No.
I have fallen.
Fallen .h.a.r.d.
No.
I'm the spitfire.
The bookworm.
The outcast
No.
He won't.
It's [only] in books.
No.
Maybe?
Impossible.
No.
No chance.
Stop hoping.
No.
You can dream
But it's not -r-e-a-l-
No.
Why /t/o/r/t/u/r/e/ yourself.
It's NOT going to happen.
Seriously.
No.
I won't admit it.
Nobody can know.
No.
I swore.
Never.
No.
I DON'T break promises.
Ever.
No.
I have fallen.
Fallen .h.a.r.d.
No.
Just *i*m*a*g*i*n*e.
It will never be •r•e•a•l•i•t•y.
None of it.
No.
Don't write his name.
Stop thinking of him.
No.
I have fallen.
Fallen in love.
No.
I cannot fall in love.
I hate them.
No.
Impossible.
Impossible, but happening.
No
LovelySocks chapter 1 . 11/10/2012
Ooh! That was definitely a refreshing view on the always optimistic, unique Luna. Maybe it hurts just a little more than she lets on. Great job balancing things like bold and italics with normal writing, it was emphasized but not distracting. I love this one!
SereneMayhem chapter 10 . 9/15/2012
You write amazing freeverse. I love this :)
Skandar-Loves-Redvines chapter 6 . 3/27/2011
LilyScorpius?

What is this blasphemy?

Pfft, fine. At least they broke up... /

My favorite part was- wait, I dunno what to post here. Because I doubt you want your whole chapter copy&pasted into a review. Er...

Oh! Here we go, my /absolute/ favorite:

"Do you know how hearts break, child?

Just like pretty stars in the sky,

Do you know how they die?

It's all the same, love"

'Twas beautiful, darling.

Don't forget, the only reason that I'm allowing this is because he breaks up with her.

P

Drishti

[fail - I actually spelt my own name incorrectly]
jesslovessmiles chapter 6 . 3/27/2011
Wow. I thought it was really good writing :)
chasingafterstarlight chapter 5 . 3/27/2011
Hey! :)

YOU WRITE MOLLYLYSANDER? /dies

I've been told I'm one of the biggest Mollysander shippers, so when I saw that of the pairings, I had to read it. And then I read this and it was amazing but so sad.

LOVE IT. LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT.

Keep writing!
kingslayers chapter 5 . 3/1/2011
Aw Moll. Heartbreak's a b*tch, huh?
kingslayers chapter 4 . 3/1/2011
I don't like this pairing but I do like this story because it shows how much Vic loves him.
kingslayers chapter 3 . 3/1/2011
I was planning on reviewing at the end but I couldn't help myself.

I love that they have flaws (poor baby werewolf)[poor little trainwreck] but it makes them whole. And Lily Lorcan was slipped in! Hizzah.

P. S. Why was Dominique crying?
am3liapond chapter 5 . 1/26/2011
Ugh. Tears, why are you all over my face? Seriously. If I had to sum it up in a word: amazing.

There's something about the way you write that reminds me of the film Tangled. Not sure why.

You write so beautifully.
am3liapond chapter 4 . 1/26/2011
Wow wow wow. Everything, from the metaphors, to the language you used, from the first to the last word was perfect. No joke. Best Lily/Teddy free verse I've ever read.

It's soso wrong

To feel this way about a child

She's twelve, for Christ's sake!

But she's blossoming in a way your precious Vicky never did

Tumbling, overflowing with life and vitality

And that mischievous gleam in her eye

Makes you love her more

Victoire knows, of course

She's always known, really

Because you're the wild boy

With the blue blue hair

And her blond locks

Though beautiful

Are to meek against the exciting life you want to live

So she pretends everything's okay

Because she can't rewrite her happily ever after

And she doesn't want you to leave

Because she loves you, okay

And she's always been there and will always be there

And what the hell are you thinking,

running off with some child,

let alone her freaking cousin?

So there's screaming

And tears

But she loves you enough

To let you go

And you run straight to Lily

Because all paths

Lead back to Lily

Sorry for the humongosaurous hunk of text I copied, but I couldn't pick a bit I liked most, so I pasted half of it. I would've added the first half, too.

Did I mention how perfect this was?
roslintower chapter 4 . 1/26/2011
So sad...I love the ending, though.
Skandar-Loves-Redvines chapter 5 . 1/25/2011
I cannot express in words how muc this.

If I had to tell you what my favorite part was, I'd have to copy and paste the whole thing in. My absoluteabsolute favorite is probably, "And he did come,

But his armor was rusty

And his song was off key" though.

Can you do me a favor, and just quit writing? The excellence of your writing depresses me.
merdarkandtwisty chapter 5 . 1/25/2011
I can really relate to poor molly in this one really good.
Skandar-Loves-Redvines chapter 4 . 1/25/2011
I'm not the hugest fan of LilyTeddy, but I really loved this one.

I loved your description of Victoire, and how she had everything planned out in life (especially that mention of Teddy "And you're an integral part of her future, you know").

And the metaphors were gorgeous, too. "What if you want to step away from the airbrushed perfection, and move closer to the wildflowers?" I lovelovelove () that line.

As always, this story was absolutely amazing. Can I hear an "awesomesauce"?

Great work!

-Drishti
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