Reviews for Strawberry Incubus
vertian black chapter 4 . 1/16
i hate you
lilcrazygirl50 chapter 11 . 12/21/2013
This story was really good. I couldn't stop reading. I really would like to see a a sequel to this story but have it be Notoria and Shiro's story.
DinoCookieh chapter 6 . 10/4/2013
"I feel like I'm in some kind of supernatural novel. I wonder who's writing this amazing crap."
That made me giggle nonstop for like 10 minutes. I love this story ;w;
MasqueradedMystery chapter 11 . 9/24/2013
Thank you very much for posting this brilliantly written tale! I loved reading all perfectly-flowing 11 chapters; the plot was as polished as the development of characters and their relationships were distinguished!

The subtle hint of canon made this story just that bit sweeter.

I found this fanfiction adorable at times, whilst other times I was left as hooded-eyed as Ichigo ;)

I was a bit concerned originally at the lack of reference to lots of characters or lack in the importance of mentioned ones ,but reaching the end, I'm glad for your decision; the protagonists of the story are given full attention, which highlights the purity of their relationship - you managed to write a beautifully romantic tale by utilising your ability as an author to highlight certain characters' and their significance to the storyline.

Thank you for this beautiful read, we all appreciate the time and effort put into this. I Hope I get to read more outstanding works by you! - Masqueraded Mystery
27kirune12 chapter 11 . 7/10/2013
I FRIGGIN' LOVE YOUR STORY SO MUUUCH :3 ! ! !
AWESOME ! ! !
. . . I have a GREAT weakness for virgin Ichigo :3
Yumeina-sama chapter 6 . 6/4/2013
So yah, the constant aizen/ichi is turning me off.. It makes me feel like ichi's a whore.. -.- o well all incubus are whores.. LOL
narutonarutolove chapter 11 . 1/31/2013
You know something? This is the only story i have ever read, that i had left reading incomplete, yet came back to finish. I had only read up to half of the fourth chapter, said i was gonna continue later, and kept putting it off for months, yet after all this time, i still remembered the name of the story, the chapter, and what the heck was going on. Theve been alot of stories where i lost interest in over time. Haha, i came back for more!

I loved this story, how the characters are portrayed, and everything. The way you write and describe things is amazing, on of the best i have read. The pace of the story is perfect, extended for not too long, but not too rushed. I just loved it.

Is there a story, or have you writting a stroy about Shiro and Nnoitora? I would like to read about them!
rion-rion chapter 11 . 12/16/2012
I love your story! I had a great time reading it
thank you :)
blahblahblah19229 chapter 11 . 7/15/2012
Okay; it's 2:11 A.M. so this probably won't be the best review; but I LOVED your story. I'm really shocked that this was your first one. You will DEFINITELY be receiving more reviews from me very soon. Great work.
Nekokratik chapter 11 . 6/18/2012
Aww! Great story! I love it! So sweet and perfect in all sense of tastes XDD
YaoiCandy chapter 11 . 4/25/2012
This story was absolutely beautiful i loved every second of it Uu really outdid Uurself im a huge Yaoi and bleach fan so seeing a story written with so much detail was just GREAT! This was hands down the best fan-fic ive read so far. THIS WAS HOT HOT HOT AND SEXY FILLED WITH SEXXX yaoiCandy loves yaoi's with plenty of sex scenes XD loveeeeeed IT!..This i definatley going into my favorites :3
Shadow Demon chapter 11 . 11/29/2011
NOOOOOO! I HAVE ARRIVED AT THE END! Imma go read your other stories now... There were times in this story were I thought,'YOU BITCH, HOW COULD YOU DO THAT TO THEM?*insert spazz attack*' and other times were I was all,'OH EMM GEE THIS IS SOSOSOSOO CUTE AND FUNNY AND-*squees**insert crazed giggling*'. And so, if you're wondering, THIS IS EFFING AWESOME.

Yes, I am bipolar, and No I don't react this way to every story.I do belive I am done acting insane, so I really like how you had Grimmjow as the 'Cubis King.(semi inside joke I guess?) So,-DIE AIZEN, DIE !- I'll probaby reread this story two million times.*headdesk* OFF FOR MORE GRIMMICHI ! ※If u actually read this, THANK YOU.※
Yokiryuu chapter 11 . 9/26/2011
sweet, sweet and sweet. did I mention sweet?

- Just LOVED this story - kind of liked the fact that it's for one ichi who is a demon and not only grimm. XD

Should have been sleeping for a few hours ago, but this story kind of messed that up.. Big time. haha.
Recklessly Impulsive chapter 11 . 7/1/2011
Lol, all he really wanted was for Grimmjow to take him there and now, regardless of the fact that the man was covered in other peoples blood XD

A perfect end to a perfect story :D

Ja ne
Recklessly Impulsive chapter 10 . 7/1/2011
Lol Grimmjow pouted like a child because Ichi wouldn't tell him he loved him XD It was funny that Grimm was annoyed that he had to wait a little longer before he could take Ichi XD Steamy Lemon there I must say, very well written, however more moaning and "Nnngh'" And "Mmmm's" and "AH's" Would have made it much better.

*Perverse Grin*

All in all it was a great story :D
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