Reviews for Regrets
WolfGrigoryPassionSoulmate chapter 19 . 5/14
chicken shits
WolfGrigoryPassionSoulmate chapter 18 . 5/14
wow... loved this chapter. but lol thats my cue to make like a tree and leave
ilovesos9467 chapter 33 . 2/25
Awwe. Such a cute story. Loved the wedding
bella swan-whitlock chapter 11 . 8/27/2014
love this chapter rose amd demitri
Hemmo1996xx chapter 26 . 8/6/2014
Rose is over reacting. Dimitri didn't have any control what he did so why is Rose making a big deal about this?
Bretzke8 chapter 8 . 4/24/2014
Also I think you need to think about the characters. I don't think you really capturing them. You should try to rethink how they would treat each other and interact in these situations.
Bretzke8 chapter 8 . 4/24/2014
Ok I'm sorry I can't read any farther. Its just the writing needs help. I think the plot is fine, but I recommend that you re-wright the whole thing once your more experienced. Your ideas are good but I can tell that your in experienced just by the way its written. It sounds like a teenager rambling in her diary. There is a lack in vocabulary, adjectives and detail. It doesn't really draw a picture for me. You know? I think you have the potential to be a fantastic writer. You just need more practice and a bit of organization.
dsj chapter 5 . 1/25/2014
sooo she'll have a abortion if he doesn't want her...but she'll keep it if he does,,,,hmm that doesn't seem right does it?
I think she should go ahead and have that abortion anyway. He's only staying because you have a working womb rose! He would fuck Tasha just to have a baby! Probably any morio that would let him impregnante and your fucking ok with that? Fuck no, hell fucking no.i don't see how rose COULD EVER FORGIVE HIM...like ever he has no problem leaving you rose even though he loves you...that's not love rose! not at all. I kinda want her baby to die in that car accident...it would serve dimitri right!
df chapter 3 . 1/25/2014
she'll never be more then a friend rose im just gonna fuck her until shes pregnant..but shes just a friend ok I love you.
puke...how can dimitri be such a fuckhole?
djsk chapter 2 . 1/25/2014
I say let him go...hes willing to leave rose so he can have a baby. Dimitri is being incredibly selfish. I say let him go with Tasha..tashas 32 she may not even be able to get pregnant. Oh that would be some sweet revenge for you rose...dimitri could marry Tasha then try for a baby and have it never happen...while rose lives a happy life with her son and a really hot piece of dhampir named ambrose. LOL yes I like it! Dimitri would see rose again after a few years of misery and think she was even more beautiful then before. Hate himself for fucking up and then he could randomly hear that rose can have children with dhampirs..and he can really see what he could have had if he wasn't a selfish prick...and then enter rose and ambrose...rose heavily pregnant with ambroses son...happy as hell! ambrose sees dimitri and smirks at his ass...ohhhh I like it... enter Tasha...all old and not pregnant lol dimitri resents her...yup I like it
catherine10 chapter 19 . 12/13/2013
i think it's a great idea and i think rose should forgive dimitri i just love seing them together
tbrett29 chapter 33 . 11/11/2013
I enjoyed reading your story and I loved the last chapter- it was a great ending:-)
me chapter 13 . 9/2/2013
Dimitri said I if she thinks I could ever love her as much as I love rose she is...doesn't that sound like he does love Tasha just not as much as rose...I get it he does love Tasha because Tasha has a womb...but he loves rose more...hmmmm rose must be better in bed. cause the way you've painted him so far, hes a fuckin piece of shit.
me chapter 9 . 9/2/2013
funny how shes all of a sudden disgusting to dimitri and yet I remember just 3 days ago he was willing to have sex with her so they could play happy family...but now that he knows roses womanly organs are working...now Tasha is icky...wow way to make me hate dimitri...usually you try to make your main characters likable so that the readers want to keep reading. ya I quit this shit
me i chapter 6 . 9/2/2013
I really expected alittle more remorse over the fact that he was going to go with Tasha to fuck her...while leaving a 17 year old pregnant! The fact that he is now willing to stay is fucking bullshit. He'll only stay with rose if her womb works correctly...awww that's love. To hell with that mother fucker. I need to protect roza...ya from yourself perv
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