Reviews for The Harem Plan Commences
Mark the Mark chapter 16 . 12/3/2017
Alright read it all again, Wish you had a chapter with everyone talking about what happened, or like a 'Yami 2' where they figure out were they stand with Rito and this 'harem plan'. But was enjoyable for a smut story, so goodjob.
Mark the Mark chapter 9 . 12/3/2017
Omg RINGO was an option!? Why didn't it happen!?
Mark the Mark chapter 4 . 12/3/2017
I want to have a reaction from Ren... His body was just fucked. XD
Mark the Mark chapter 17 . 12/3/2017
So the story happened over again but had this ending :P Momo you sly devil/
Guest chapter 5 . 7/20/2017
Momo does not know that them girls could get pregnant
Guest chapter 17 . 3/30/2017
I hope you do make a sequel!
Guest chapter 5 . 2/17/2017
rito and mikan should remember this.
MisterLooneyTune chapter 15 . 2/5/2017
My favorite chapters are the ones with Momo, Run, Haruka and this one with Lala. Awesome story.
MisterLooneyTune chapter 1 . 1/31/2017
Why Momo so hot when she's being perverted and naughty? I just don't know why it's so attractive to me.
Guest chapter 9 . 1/22/2017
I think some people would actually enjoy ringo
Guest chapter 4 . 1/21/2017
I can't write this on all of your chapters since its already finished so i'll say this once nobody ever tuchs a mans lebido EVER!
Guest chapter 3 . 12/28/2016
Momo is evil and slightly adorable in a evil sort of way at the end lol good job
Justwannaknow chapter 11 . 11/19/2016
its good, i enjoy your writing and i hope you do the filler with akiho and ringo. I really want to read it.
Guest chapter 4 . 10/5/2016
Good
lordevasto chapter 9 . 9/29/2016
dont include ringo and haruko cuz the story wont be good add mea n tear n try to create a riko situation
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