Reviews for Breaking Impulse
shadowama chapter 11 . 2/22
As much as I am interested in this story, I cannot read it anymore. It's too confusing. Who is Elizabeth's mother? Is it Tanya or is it Lauren? You have parts of the story all mixed up. Calling Reneseme a "him" and Ryan a "her". You had a scene around chapter nine where Emment was calling Edward because Elizabeth's bio-mom wanted to take her away. THEN two chapters later... Rosalie is telling Emment what happened when he was already there. AND apparently Edward is okay with leaving his three year old daughter home alone. It's just not adding up to me. Sorry
Guest chapter 14 . 7/5/2015
Bella should be worried, she is an assistant and that doesn't pay much or will she deprnd on Edwards money

I am curios whether bella was ever with anyone else or is it the typical bella is only allowed with edward story

I sure hope not because so far i really liked ths extraodinaire story
twimima7 chapter 5 . 5/24/2015
Finally! good job grandparents Cullen and auntAlice and especially uncle Jasper.
twimima7 chapter 4 . 5/24/2015
Wow Carlisle was on the spot. Glad she did not lie to him and hope she tells Edward soon.
twimima7 chapter 2 . 5/24/2015
Bella needed to listen to Jasper and tell Edward about his twins.
twimima7 chapter 1 . 5/24/2015
Returned to my notebook only to find you updated your story. Thank you very much. I felt it was good, so glad you have started writing again.
Twihardkristen-once chapter 14 . 5/12/2015
Don't leave us hanging
Also why do ur stories talk about tanya then talk about Lauren when they are referring to the same girl?
nessa01 chapter 14 . 5/3/2015
Omg she pregnant! I really hope that she does want to be with Edward because of the kids!

Can't wait for next update! ! ! ! !
Amazone3 chapter 14 . 4/30/2015
I reales Hope this is a Dream and You are laughing your ass off!
JoJo Sky chapter 14 . 4/29/2015
Is that a dream I hope so. Please don't make this a Vampire story.
Princess Mishawaka chapter 14 . 4/27/2015
WOW vampires, wolves and everything in between. I would be psyched out if I were Bella.
lilmstran chapter 14 . 4/27/2015
loved it
can't wait to read more
kelley turner chapter 14 . 4/26/2015
Write more pleas and thank you so mush
sujari6 chapter 14 . 4/26/2015
Interesting twist although it could all be a dream.
Guest chapter 14 . 4/26/2015
OMG! Girl... I am sure you never was pregnant coz a hand print on the stomach? its still an embryo... if a hand print is showing it has to be late in the pregnancy ( maybe 7 - 9 months)... Lol
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