"here lies red
he did something"

mood

Amazing, awe-inspiring, artistic... and I'm only on A. Apart from some grammar and perhaps reworking a few transitions (some parts needed more clarification as to what was happening) it was brilliant!

This story I read it once before and I cried but looking back at this my sentiments are why didn't more people read this this the best 2 shot fic that I have ever read nothing even comes close to comparing to it. But It makes me wonder will people look back in this 'timeline' and if Red and Mew accomplished what they were seeking.

This was one of the most epic stories I've ever read. I'm not sure if I even "liked" it - I'm just blown away. I, personally, don't care for the main characters here. Their personalities weren't identifiable to me. (I had no idea what Arceus was supposed to be like. Was he just an angry Pokemon? Was he territorial? I couldn't get a grasp on why he was attacking Red so fervently - he surely MADE the Azure Flute for a reason!) However, I did like the story - the development, the change, the small moments and big ones.

Most of all, I liked how, without Pikachu, it showed how (in)dependent Red was on her. How... important, essential, she was to him. And how, without her, he lost some of his morality, because he didn't care for anyone else.

She was the only one, I suppose. Mew(two) was an equal, but he wasn't anything "to" Red, I felt. They were more like ...I dunno. Debt-collectors to each other? Like, since Red did that to Mew(two), it/he had to stay until he could repay what Red subjugated him to.

So yeah. Good story, and... impressionable. Epic.

-Rayne

I read this a while ago. It's still as awesome and creepy as the last time I read it :D

Much love.

Very nice, love the way you portrayed both Red and Mewtwo!

awsome story a bit hard to follow at some points but epic no-nor-less

The grammar needs a lot of work, such as using 'their' when you mean his or hers, but overall is a great story and concept. Fix the grammar and you have a classic. :D

Thanks for writing this and putting it up here for me to find and read.

I feel the need to applaud. ...

Whoa. That was mildly confusing. Did Arceus rewrite reality or simply send Red to an alternate dimension? Will there be more of this story or is that it? Is the end paragraph simply showing the future where Red lies dead after creating his new region?

this was probably the best story i have read on here. you expect pokemon to fun/fluffy or adventurous and stuff but this was beautiful and meaningful. my favourite.

I am loving this. You've expanded the characters beautifully while remaining true to their cores.

That was...amazing. Truly. I want to say more, but I don't know what. I'm speechless?

Beautiful work.

like the story and all but in the game red is just there as a challenge, in th real pokemon manga which he game is loosly based on, Red pretty much beats the crap out of Gold as well as everyone else from other games. But i agree with you it always kida gets to me that you can have gold beat red in his game, but in reds game red doesnt gt to batle nd beat gold. well whatever nicetory update soon.

Only one word can describe a story such as this. Brilliant.

This is one of the best stories I have ever read, if it is a one-shot, it is the best. If not, you can make it even more amazing.

That I believe.

Okay enough with the formal crap, this, so far, is the best story EVER!

PLEASE, CONTINUE!