|Reviews for Susan AU|
| Unknown Kadath chapter 1 . 2/28/2011
Are you planning on continuing this? It's marked as complete, but if you're planning to continue this it should probably be as part of the same story.
Is Chantho supposed to be Susan? That's a bit confusing. But it's an interesting story, I'd certainly read more if you wrote it.
| Aietradaea chapter 1 . 1/20/2011
Ooh! This is /unique/! Chantho as Susan - /never/ seen that before, and it's got me interested. :)
Great writing - particularly your treatment of the Time War as something kind of beyond mortal human comprehension.
A tip for if you continue - maybe separate your author's notes in some way? Italic or bold or a break or something - that one at the end of this chapter just looked a little odd at first.