Reviews for Days of Significance
Inkfire chapter 3 . 2/6/2011
This was absolutelyabsolutely awesome and really intense and perfect all over. You really captured this moment and it's brilliant, brilliant, brilliant. Your writing absolutely conveyed that sense of lively, bursting-with-happiness-completely-complete-and-out-of-the-world bliss. The descriptions were perfect and your words were well chosen are striking - I love how you described the characters' behaviour, Maddie's too-tight dress was a really funny and endearing moment, that sentence "And it's not traditional, not flawless, but it's wonderful." was pretty meaningful with the italics, and the last one, though it might seem plain if you looked at it by itself, really fit and brought a sense of closure that made the whole thing complete. Awesome job :D
Inkfire chapter 2 . 2/6/2011
This was amazing! It was so moving - I loved it. I really loved Charlie at the beginning, trying to be calm, to let nothing show, and yet knowing already (and it was brilliant that he kept correcting himself, thinking of his niece, not his daughter). The moment with Bill was heart-breaking... I loved the end, especially the distinction between the most significant day of his life and of his existence - it was pretty meaningful. Great, great job :D
Inkfire chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
I really liked this! Your idea of the day was pretty original, and you did all of the kids very cutely. I especially loved Dom's age (three quarters, LOL!), and Dom's and Lily's conviction that the angel is RED, and nothing else. Really good job :)
dee the deer chapter 1 . 12/18/2010
Aw! This was just the cutest thing! I loved it :)

Your characters were great and loved Dom to pieces _

Amazin, amazing, amazing :D