Reviews for The Mall of Hetalia |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love your story and i hope you keep going. Also is Feli or Romano sell their soul to sebby. lol jk, but really keep up the good work |
![]() ![]() yOU DIDNT FORGET SEBORGA OMG MARRY ME |
![]() ![]() 1.) Oh great, demonization of female characters for "getting in da wai of teh yaois" Perfect. 2) You do realize Romano is actually nice and flirtatious towards women as opposed to men, right? |
![]() ![]() Jesus christ What the fuck is this Why does everyone like this? WHY DOES THIS EXIST?! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nooooo plz, hurry and continue, it was just getting to the good prt. ! :0 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Austria and Hungary are a given, HongIce is adorable, i don't ship Koreaxvietnam, i think i'd ship Estonia and Latvia if given a proper story, Sealand and Seborga would be cute but i've never shipped them before, but the rest, no thank you : |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was pretty good |
![]() ![]() Grell: SEBAS-CHAN! Me: RRUUUUNNNN, JUST RUUUUUNNNN! |
![]() ![]() I'm praying there is a mall like this that exists, or at least cosplayers willing to make it happen! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() The butler's name is Sebastian! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please let us know what the name of the rewritten is. please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() BLACK BUTLER... Oh and the pain in the ads thing was funny xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why are you rewriting it?.. it's already perfect! You should continue it and if you need help with Ideas I will help you! |
![]() ![]() Ok so I think a good Idea is that you add a little more prucan and gerita and maybe a past story with some one-sided pruita where prussia loved Italy but decided to give up hope for his little bro. Also I think it'd be awesome to add Austria and Hungary to the story and make a flash back seen where Austria said he loved Italy but Italy forgot about it and Austria and Germany fight for Italy's love. Also I'd thought and I ink you should add Russia and china into the story and have Greece in the story more too. Prologue: Italy and Germany have been friends for awhile. Germany started to realize how he felt for the small nation and decides to tell him. He finds out many others love Italy too and decides to fight for him. Who will win dear ita's heart. Pairings: rusita, pruita, gerita, itapan (one sided for Japan), ameita, prucan, spamano, amepan, ausita, little bit of itacest and finally Russiaxchina (I can't remember their nickname for their couple XD) please add some smutty, kinky, cute scenes and make it Pretty! Love: kali |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Ahh beat a nigga with a biscuit!" i just what lol never have I laughed so hard during the smutty part of a story. |