Reviews for Echo, Chapter 1
Wow chapter 5 . 12/28/2011
Okay so I had expected some piss poor writing from someone who posted their story in the wrong section with no summary and published every chapter as a new story and has yet to take the others down. Holy cow did you prove me wrong. This... This is wonderful writing and so real! Things haven't been sugar coated and glossed over, the characters are so intresting. I'm very thourghly impressed with the quality or your writing. This is excellent, I can't wait to see what come next. But you do realize that this is something you post on ficitonpress right? An original story like this?
CenturyArchive chapter 1 . 7/23/2011
You can post multiple chapters within the same story. No need to post separate stories per chapter. Nice writing style, by the way!
Lady Hawk Wind chapter 5 . 5/11/2011
Dude...or dudette, i was surprised with how much skill you showed in these five chapters. And i'm sure i'm not the only one who thinks this. You have to continue with it.