|Reviews for One Thread Pulled|
| LittleBozSheep chapter 2 . 12/31/2017
Congratulations on getting it published! I read the story back when it was published on here, so many years ago. :)
| sudenmorssian chapter 1 . 10/20/2016
I'm reading now Constant as the Sun and I like it a lot. But I wish I could read the first story. It' a bit anfair to readers in other countries who can't buy it from amazon. Pity.
| BooksAreMedicine chapter 1 . 9/7/2016
Interesting idea...I am curious to see where it will go
| Lady Donna chapter 1 . 7/3/2016
See the review on Amazon for the whole book, One Thread Pulled, though my full name is there. I simply loved this book and gave it a 5 star review on Amazon. I am reading the version of Constant as the Sun on here and am hoping it will go 20 chapters and be published and I am desperate to know what happens. In any case. I did think Mr. Bennet was unfair to Lizzy and Darcy when the book did not end with a wedding and maybe a honeymoon for them except it was very long. I do hope Constant as the Sun will end that way. There's a lot of new problems there, though Mr. Bennet's reasons for the conditional betrothal seemed more like excuses to avoid losing his favorite daughter. In any case, I always love it when Mary is given a chance for happiness as in this book. I have always liked her and thought that Jane Austen did not deal with her fairly and dismissed her. She did not even have Mr. Collins considering her, though it is good that she will have a much better husband than him in this book and Constant as the Sun. I think in Jane Austen's notes she intended Mary to only eventually marry a clerk in her Uncle Philips' law firm which was not regarded as highly in England at the time as it might be here in the USA. This book was exciting. Miss Bingley, Mr. Collins, Lady Catherine, and Mr. Wickham are very bad, though Mr. Wickham seems to be disposed of quickly. The others can pop up again. I have a problem with Lizzy having to feel okay with the Ton doings in London because I have personally found those doings superficial and something of a pain. At least, Lizzy enters them as an engaged woman instead of single, but all of the rules of the time left her open to other men (many of them rakes) able to dance with her and limitations. Will everyone still be after Darcy. Of course, there is the challenge of Darcy's Aunt and Uncle, the Countess and Earl and Col. Fitzwilliam's older brother. The writing is very good and well edited. The one thread pulled helped Lizzy avoid hearing that insulting comment, so that it was possible, even with Darcy haughty, for less pride and prejudice and quicker liking for one another. Also Bingley and Jane married faster, but Miss Bingley is a real potential problem since she has mental stability issues. Note: I read this in a final purchased version rather than the draft on here. I keep hoping and hoping to see the final version of Constant as the Sun which implies dependability of someone like Darcy and/or Elizabeth, I hope, I hope. I do recommend this book and as much as the follow-up as possible. If there is a way to read past Chapter 20 in Constant as the Sun I would appreciate knowing, though it is more difficult to read via a browser than through the Kindle application.
| Brokenwings35 chapter 1 . 5/6/2016
I liked the chapter.
| Guest chapter 2 . 3/14/2016
Please, if you could include your name (the one on the front of your book) somewhere in your information here: ffn does not allow links and so "one thread pulled" as a google search does eventually lead me to your book, but it is more work than if I had the author's name to include also.
Just trying to streamline things! (and let you know that ffn deleted all your useful links in your profile -_-;;; )Thanks! Looking forward to reading your book!
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/23/2016
i wish i could have read this, but i hope it was good! :D
| Antiquatedgirl18 chapter 1 . 11/13/2014
So I read the preface of your book here on , then downloaded the ebook sample and read that, then bought the book and finished it in 2 days! I enjoyed it :)
| CocoaCollidoscope chapter 2 . 10/3/2014
I remember reading parts of this story when you were writing it, but never the full story. I definitely want to purchase a copy of your book. CONGRATS. I will buy it from BN or Amazon, not sure yet... but is it still possible to request an autographed copy from you? Would I mail it to you or something? Can this be done? Thank you for sharing such a lovely story - I will have to force myself to wait to read the sequel you are working on now.
| Hannah chapter 2 . 10/1/2014
october 15 of this year?
| CrazyChick114 chapter 1 . 3/2/2014
Hi! I read the first chapter here, and it seemed so promising, I bought the book from Amazon... I'm halfway through it, and I must say it is absolutely amazing! :-D I recently rediscovered my love for Pride and Prejudice, and your book just makes me happy :-D Absolutely loving it!
| estelle sky chapter 2 . 11/28/2013
Going to buy your kindle book now! Congrats on getting published! :)
| HazelJoe chapter 1 . 11/22/2013
I enjoyed your book when will your next book Constant as the Sun be released?
| 1sunfun chapter 2 . 11/15/2013
| Julianabr chapter 1 . 10/16/2013
Love this story!
Buy the full story on amazon, you won't be sorry. I'm anxiously awaiting the completion of the sequel.