|Reviews for Royal Pain|
| Harkas chapter 1 . 12/3/2012
"The weather is lovely," he answered, "but not as lovely as something else I see…"
"Oh, and what is what?" she asked.
He pointed behind him. "Jaffar."
Oh man that's just priceless XD
Aside from that loved the portrayal of good 'ol Eli and Ninian
Not enough of it around these parts
| Hikaru Morinaga chapter 1 . 1/6/2011
Haaa, Maman, this fic was amusing! Also I lol'd at this line: [Her tone reminded him of his mother when she used to speak to him about crazy adventures he'd pretended to have.]
Totes Eliwood when he was a kid. Totally fighting dragons in his backyard with Hector using sticks for swords. (Maybe Hector was the damsel in distress. ...now I want to write that.)
This was love 3
| Elficiel chapter 1 . 12/22/2010
Didn't know Eliwood could be that mischievous! XP I love how you presented him; he looks more endearing and funny here! Ninian's surely having a lot of fun!
| Pen and Paper71 chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
Oh, thank you so much! I love this! I love it all. The flirting, the general playfulness of the characters in this, and, well, I just loved it all. This is wonderful and I'm very grateful. Thank you again!