This story was very well written! Didn't notice any grammar or spelling mistakes, it also fits nicely with the show and the characters felt on point.

There was only one thing I thought about and that is that is some countries the dors in the backseat ont open from the inside at all, as to prevent tiefs and such from escaping. So the police officer would have to let john out when they got to baker street.

otherwise a really great story, and my favourite of it all was the ending. It really was top notch and showed Sherlocks personality, and how he Does care. Just in his own way.

Would love a story about how after another case this checking in on eachother becomes the norm, or something of the sort.

Aw these boys are so stubborn. I love how they both just want to take care of each other! Great story

Aww, I love seeing the two of them fret over each other. They;d never worry about their wn healths of course, but each other's is important

In ways, they are both such children. John still being the maturer of the two by far, but still. This was sweet, though! It's nice to see them taking such care of each other, even when they're mad.

Nicely done! I love doctor John. And being strangled twice in two days can't possibly be good for anyone.

Absolutely brilliant, especially the ending. First class whump - double whump! Thank you for writing xx

Ah bless, that was beautiful! And a lot more in-character than the other storys I read.

A much-needed scene beautifully brought to the page by a skillful writer! Definitely becoming one of my favourites.

"Mrs. Turner was delighted to be of assistance," Sherlock said, speaking of their neighbor and Mrs. Hudson's close friend, Marie Turner. Mrs. Hudson was always borrowing her computer, having none of her own, so she could leave comments on John's blog. "If her hair wasn't already up in curlers, she would have come over to fuss at you herself," Sherlock added ominously. "Consider yourself fortunate. The bag is full of pastries, for breakfast. Apparently, we need fattening up. Now, eat." Now I see why Mrs. Turner and Mrs. Hudson get on so well...

Wonderful, wonderful job. Keep on writing!

How very very sweet! I love it! Thank you!

Great story. :D I loved it.

I really like how well you did this story. I think you got their relationship down very well!

Oh, this was wonderful. It hurt my heart a little, but in a good way.

This was so lovely and well-written! I always think there are never enough fics about The Blind Banker and the possible aftermath, and you did this one so perfectly!

The "Playing tag with a young Sherlock" thing made me just about say "awww!" out loud. It's probably good that I didn't.

adorable!

:D