|Reviews for Destiny's Deviation: Outset Island|
| D.J. Scales chapter 8 . 1/31/2011
Sounds to me like you've got something here but with a little more work you may have something to call a good tale. Not that the tale isn't good now but still a story is only as good as the chapters in said story.
| Kyle chapter 7 . 1/28/2011
That OC woudl get gross if she found out where hot dogs REALLY come from and no it isn't from dogs either. :p
It's far more sinister.
| Kyle chapter 5 . 1/28/2011
The best way to describe snow is that ,as a thumb of rule, the entire layer of the sky has to be at or below 32F AND there has to be water in the air to create the frozen rain that converts to snow.
What is the average winter day/night temps where your OC is from? Does she at least get *frost* events?
| Kyle chapter 4 . 1/28/2011
The only complaint is that your chapters are WAY to short if your intention is to make this a character development fic.
Regardless if there is any adventure/action this needs to be longer but I am not to judge how long.
| D.J. Scales chapter 7 . 1/27/2011
Sounds like this is okay considering that Wind Waker Fanfics are the only ones that I really understand.
| KingofHeartless'09 chapter 7 . 1/16/2011
| KamiByul chapter 5 . 12/31/2010
I love that she tries to explain snow :D
| KingofHeartless'09 chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
Wow scary start