|Reviews for Cheaters Never Prosper, and Neither Do Idiots|
| boxofpandora16 chapter 17 . 6/20/2014
It's what two in the morning and I decided 'what the heck, its officially summer and I fell like reading a fic and giving an extremely detailed review'. So Miss Olivia you are the lucky one who will be recieving my very detailed review. Now bear with me I actually made a list and took notes! So to start the point of view. Oh my gosh best part about this story. I loved how you made it like we were actually in their heads or they were talking to us as readers like they were telling us the story but weren't at the same time. Now as a reader I do have a favorite pov and that would be Lassiter's . He was so raw and funny in my opinion. His description of the events were so true and raw. I loved it because this is how we think and see things. We see things like how you described Lassiter but with more emotion because well Lassie is the lowest on the range of emotion. Next, "This was getting way too Oprah for me." By now your probally thinking to yourself, 'who is this nutjob that is quoting my own work?!" Well Olivia, I am a fan and as I said before I made a list. This quote made the list because well it made me laugh. I remember my mom watching Oprah and I always remember her sitting on a couch and often enough there were tears. So it just made me laugh. Following your quote is the Declan-Juliet scene. I liked how you wrote this scene because of the emotions Juliet was feeling and how you portrayed them. When you have Declan say that it'll be okay and Juliet gets angry by that, it seemed real. People actually feel these emotions of anger and sadness at the same time while they're grieving and I found that scene very well done. Now, next on my list of notes is that I was confused about your 'fake Jules' character because at one point I thought it was Ellie but as I neared the end that confusion was cleared up so we can scratch that off of the list. Now, I have a question for you Olivia, did you actually look up the information on being buried alive because it did seem pretty legit but one can nevr know. "Stereotypically terrible coffee" made me laugh and that is why it made the ever so famed list. The thing is it is true. Hospital coffee is pretty bad so I'm making a happy laughing face. Finally the end of my short kind of long sloppily written list. The Lassie/Carebear thing. OMG! That made me laugh so hard. All I could think about was the Yang episode when McNabb asked Lassiter how he felt and then he called him a robot. I was also thinking about how my dog's favorite stuffed animal is a purple carebear that says "I love you" when you squeeze its hand but that is irrealevant at this point. So it it the time where I must complete my long review to you Olivia and actually go to sleep because it is now like two thirty. So anyway I'm sticking my two thumbs and my pinkie toes in the air for your story!
| danceofshadows chapter 17 . 1/19/2014
| Joana Smith chapter 17 . 12/5/2013
| Sherlockian- Psycho chapter 17 . 5/25/2013
wow that was really great. I must have read it all in half an hour, my compliments a really great psych (and Shules) fan fiction loved it XD
| tomcruisers chapter 6 . 5/18/2013
R u sure u aren't a real author in disguise?
| tomcruisers chapter 6 . 5/17/2013
R u sure u aren't a real author in disguise?
| detectiveconanfreak01 chapter 17 . 4/5/2013
you should write and extra chapter. :)
| ZeDancingHobbit chapter 17 . 4/4/2013
You are amazing. Like, legitly amazing. Your stories are great. Your whump is great. Akdhsks.
Because you are so amazing, you have earned thyself a follow. And I look forward to what you will write soon(:
| maya2 chapter 17 . 3/21/2013
I have no idea if I have reviewed this chapter already or not so I guess I'll find out when I press submit. If not, I truly enjoyed this final chapter. Juliet was pretty emotional but in light of the circumstances she had a sound reason to be, so it worked. I liked that you gave us a little of both their POVs for this one. Most of all, I appreciate your willingness to finish what you started (even if it was three years later). A story is still fresh to it's reader each time they read it and without a conclusion it can be very frustrating. There are so many great but unfinished works on here that I simply started looking for the ones that were complete. Brava, and thanks for sharing. _
| Belle97 chapter 17 . 3/19/2013
| Belle97 chapter 16 . 3/19/2013
tell him I'm dead! xd LOL
Aahw how sweet of Lassie
Love this chapter!
| NCISVILLE chapter 17 . 3/18/2013
Great ending! I loved all of it! Congratulations btw.
| redwolffclaw chapter 9 . 3/16/2013
WOW! I love the description of what happened to Shawn on the tape. Was really well... descriptive! :D
The POVs are all so spot too.
| redwolffclaw chapter 5 . 3/16/2013
I gotta tell you I am loving this story. Must be really satisfying to have it complete.
I love how you portray Lassie. Just the right amount of blunt sarcasm.
| lilAzIaNpride24 chapter 17 . 3/15/2013
Really well thought out story. I loved it! I've never read a narration type of Shules story and I'm glad you did it. You have awesome grammar by the way, unlike some fanfiction writers. :D Keep up with the good work!