|Reviews for The Second Deal|
| Louise chapter 12 . 11/3/2017
Are you thinking about finishing?
| Wendysilva chapter 12 . 10/20/2017
I’m re-reading this story. Please update!
| draugeltheshadowhero chapter 12 . 5/2/2016
Well, I'm rereading stories that I liked when I was younger and I have to say I'm a little sad that this story never finished but, I understand that you have your own life and things happen. But maybe you could come back and finish this story if you have the time.
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/25/2016
Please continue it. Please
| PJ pop chapter 12 . 12/2/2015
It's so very upsetting to find such a talented writer and a wonderful piece of work I see so many stories like this one so very good and well written and yet never finished I understand life gets in the way and stuff comes up but please at least write in the beginning saying the story has been discontinued I absolutely loved this story but somehow I feel I've been cheated you have lots of fans and you at least owe it to them to tell them the story will not be finished at the beginning
| Ravena Wolfborn chapter 12 . 10/4/2015
oh god. this story is sooooo good. please update. I'm begging you. I need to know, ya know? seriously. please update.
| Thegr8tn8t chapter 1 . 9/17/2015
OMFG! Bleeding Writer, you are my favorite write on this site so far. I've had this account since early June, and I was reading some fanfics before that. Your "The Deal" won me over by chapter two. I read all of "The Deal" and all you have of "The Second Deal" in the span of 12 hours, I liturally did an all-nighter on a school night before a test day! And what's more is that I normally loathe romance fanfics, or romance stories in general; however, this story was so incredibly good, and extremely witty, that I enjoyed it immensely. "The Deal" is my all time favorite story so far of anyone, and I also enjoyed a lot of your other stories. (especially the "In my Veins" and the "Two Letters" ones). I just wanted to let you know I appreciate your work and ask that you keep it up ! :)
-A BIG Fan :)
| blackflowers636 chapter 12 . 5/3/2015
Seriously. Please tell me you're going to update soon!
| blackflowers636 chapter 9 . 5/3/2015
Gonna be totally honest here, as much as I hate Beast Boy being with anyone but Raven, you make Amora sound soooo cute! I can't help but love her so much more than I hate her coming from someone else. I love it when she's dancing in the mirror. Can't help but laugh every time I picture it. You are a truly awesome writer and you really know your stuff.
| blackflowers636 chapter 5 . 5/3/2015
First of all, I thought Amora had blonde hair instead of brown, and a couple paragraphs after that, you called her Melody instead of Amora. I don't know if I missed anything or what, but THIS IS NOT A HATE COMMENT. You are one of my absolute favorite authors. I totally freaked when you ended 'The Deal' please don't tell me you're gonna leave this story at a cliffhanger, too.
| Jelamy chapter 12 . 2/27/2015
When are you going to continue..I'm dyinggggg
| deanna416 chapter 12 . 2/21/2015
So hooked on this I love it I can not wait to read more
| Guest chapter 12 . 1/27/2015
Awesome but please put up a new chapter
| Guest chapter 12 . 11/2/2014
Amazing story has me wishing for more. Though i am mad at raven i do like the small growth in the relationship
| RavenSerendipity chapter 12 . 9/25/2014
You should totally update this...