Reviews for Bargain
IAmJudgingYou chapter 4 . 12/28/2010
From what I've was very OOC in everyone's case. And you included a character who hasn't really been in the main story which seems a bit...erm...odd, to me.
IAmJudgingYou chapter 1 . 12/28/2010
Not too sure that Worth was very...erm...'Worthish'? with the way you wrote him and the formatting is quite awkward. It's definitely an interesting idea you've got here, though.