|Reviews for A PokeSpe Christmas Party!|
| xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 1 . 7/21/2012
Don't ask me why I am reading a Christmas one-shot in the middle of summer I am that crazy. XD It's short but good. Nice way for wishing everyone Christmas. I think I've read it before, I am not sure but who cares. Too bad that in the manga Cheren and Bianca won't be real dexowners, since Bianca gave hers away and I am sure Cheren will give his away too. Maybe to Hue. Who knows, Ill be keeping an eye for more one-shots of your ;D.
| Anitasonia1998 chapter 1 . 1/21/2012
This was cute! You did great!
| Caster Bane chapter 1 . 11/24/2011
Technicalities concerned. With typo-graphicalities (no, its not a word), grammar, and spelling. While you read other people's work, it is strongly advisable to heed their sentence structure as you will probably learn a lot from them - be the work a perfect one or has a lot of mistakes.
Also, this is quite nice. Yes. Yes. And don't point out the obvious please. When a person continues to speak between speech tags, don't always put it directly every time.
All in all, nice story. Bar the blunders and I think it would be perfect. I'm not a fan of manga either but I understand as much as there is. So, my last word is...get a beta-reader (or get another if you've already have one).
-Prince Kael'thas Sunstrider
| ZXCVBNMEM chapter 1 . 10/13/2011
...I can't believe I missed this one though...so late...
| ChillinLikeaVillain chapter 1 . 10/1/2011
| digidestined4eva chapter 1 . 12/25/2010
D'aaaw, that's a great first fanfic you've posted here~! A tip for you is to put things (author's notes, things that aren't part of the actual fic) in bold, or put a page break in between, just for presentation reasons...
Asides from that, I liked it but it would've been better with a little more description! Keep up the good work and goood luuuuck~! :D
| Black Maya chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
Awww its so short~ D:
anyway it was great Kyle! But I do suggest you put punctuation marks. like in a part:
"Quit it, you two!" hissed Emerald "Don't you two even pay your respects to the hostess who invited us here?"
you should put commas after the quote and stuff..
So it would appear like this: (sorry im not good at explaining)
"Quit it, you two!", hissed Emerald, "Don't you two even pay your respects to the hostess who invited us here?
| Light-Sakura chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
What a great chapter! I love the fact you introduce Black and White!
| alya17 chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
Are you going to update the next chapter or finished?