Lol that was awesome

A very nice and fun continuation of your story. I liked the addition of the other POVs in this one. I also liked what you did with Ron in both of these stories. I don't think i've read many/any stories that have just Ron remaining loyal and Hermione turning her back on Harry, usually its either flipped, they both turn, or both stay. This was a nice change. Really enjoyed the world you created with both of these. Well done and thanks for sharing!

nice follow up
well done
it's a shame it took me so long to find these stories

This is just satisfying for me and for the record.

I was not expecting Gabrielle to be some what the end game and I'm not even disagreeing it with hands down this made my day! Holy shit!

Oh that was so much fun.

Sadly the Hermione from book 6 sounds like this one. Ignoring Harry after books 4 and 5 match it. So does sending het folks away. It breaks my heart because up I ship Harmony but they Luna to balance it. Some people ate only comfortable with authoritarianism

Sad to see Daphne go but there was no emotional component. I dont see Gabrille as long term. She needs more stable life and a bounty hunter won’t work

Meh the first was better. As for Hermione I cannot agree, she would only be a Weatherby if they never influenced her, but seriously the girl who lit a teacher on fire for her friend on a hunch becoming that after 5 years, it just wasn't done well enough to be that convincing. If Ron can grow up, find a brain, and loyalty I guess almost anything is possible.

Thanks for sharing!

I hope he ends up with Gabrielle

I enjoyed the story. I do think Hermione is in character ... thinks her and authority knows best.

Monarchy is the most efficient government if ran by a decent person. The following ruler may not be.

11/23
Tis a Great one, I'll will reread it every year or so, just for the happy fealing it leaves you with.

Tricky, upsetting and great two piece story!

Good Godric! This is hilarious. Its going to take a crowbar to pry the grin off my face :-D You just can't go wrong with a solid Dumble-basher! Thanks so much for writing this. I love it!

I LOVE IT :D

Okay so I thought of reviewing in the one leading up to this but then I really want to start this one so as I can know I'll just do them both together. I know that might be a little tacky not good manners but I just couldn't wait. I actually like how you dealt with Hermione, and that is because a lot of different authors take even the main characters in different ways from things established through earlier books or even what we can see that isn't 100% pointed out. I think what I really like though was all the different pairings because you didn't stick to certain ones or certain age ray you know in the same year I mean so that I think worked out a lot better. I think I like the second one here a lot more just because you had the other hit wizards you had the pranking you know you weren't as serious about having to conduct a fight or conduct a takedown. I think I'm planning on reading some of your other stories but just I want to review with these two because honestly even though they were both one shots with how long they are I felt where all your brakes were it would have been a good multi-chapter each story even if chapters were only two or three sections long. Although I must say it really begin through this a oh crap I can't suck because I know if I stopped I might get distracted. I like your writing style from a somewhat first person to a third person at times it seems it just seems to work. So I guess I'll say I enjoyed it I hope you write more and I'll go see what your other works have to say .

TuxedoMac

Another extremely good and enjoyable story.

Interesting but still the same Hermione stupidity. This means same gay stupidity as the privious one