Reviews for The Greatest Gift of All
echopj chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
Very hot. What a imaginative, dirty mind. I like it. Nice explanation of why E felt that way. Nice ending with him feeling satisfied with Bella. Happy Holidays!
grrrr.edward chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
soooo fucking hot. i need a fucking cigarette!
jenpall chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
DAmn that was hot! Too bad there's not going to more of that! Happy Holidays!
sunshinyme chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
that was ridiculously HOT HOT HOT. JEEEZUS.
sscana chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
I really enjoyed this o/s. Thanks for the holiday lovin'.
Kourt17 chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
Holy wow. I just exploded...that was one of the hottest things I have ever read ever. Then in the end he finds what he had all along is all he needs. I shall read over and over. So we have have fuck hawt annnnnnd a heart warming message. *bows to you*
mugglemom08 chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
I always get excited when I see your name in my inbox because I know whatever's waiting for me is gonna be amazing. I love a good E/B/J story and this was fabulous.
ooza chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
Loved it! It was hot, but it wasn't plotless, kwim? You set up a back story for them, and it worked. I understand the whole fantasy vs. reality thing. Just because Edward had fantasies about Jasper didn't mean he loved Bella any less or that there was anything wrong with their relationship. And in the end, everyone was happy about what transpired, and I think maybe even more appreciative for the relationship they have. Great one-shot! :D
Kmserenity chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
I found it sad, really. I get the repeated assurance that his love for B was all encompassing, but for someone who was previously Bi, to be so focused on the experience of being with another man, just seems like such a weak commitment to the decision to be in a hetero marriage. Despite the assurances, i didn't feel the marriage thing. At all. Maybe if this was a dating relationship thing, it wouldn't seem like such a break of commitment. ... Anyway, I haven't drank enough to be this philosophical about the sanctity of marriage. Geez. It's porn. Still a big fan of your writing, even though I wasn't feeling th one. Thx!
Britt01 chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
Well, yum! That was fun - thank you! LOL. Great, hot, well written scenario. And there's no reason that can't be part of their reality every once in a least in my head!
bspest04 chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
amazing story! super hot! :)
fanofbones chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
I'm not normally into threesomes, especially with my Bella and Edward (the HEA is me) but I'll admit: this was motherfucking hot with Jazz

Happy Holidays lady

Nrbl1 chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
This was just beautiful :)
acamp88343 chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
You have a dirty, dirty mind...and I LIKE it! :) What a treat. Thanks for sharing.
jjuliebee chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
My gawd. You might have outdone yourself with this one. Jeebus.
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