Reviews for The Greatest Gift of All
iwasamy chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
I've never read an ExBxJ threesome before; I don't like to share. I also worried about the chemistry between them all. But I seriously loved your story. It was so hot, but had every ounce of the love between E and B that it was just perfect. I loved your confident, self-assured Jasper too. Everything worked. Amazing. Thanks for sharing. Xxx
mexicantt chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
I really want to like this. You wrote it very well, and of course the smut was hot. But...but I just can't. Maybe I'm just not wired that way, but because of the set-up nature of how this came about, I can't see that either Edward or Bella could really trust each other again. In that bathroom, Edward would have gone further, never knowing it was "okay" for him to do so. In his own mind, he cheated on his wife. And for him, to know that Bella would do something like that to him with all of the inner torment it caused...

I just can't like it because it left me with the feeling that no matter what words came after, these two just can't have the same trust they had before.
Lori94 chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
WOW! That was PANYMELTING! Edward may not want for more...but I sure do!
laura-1025 chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
Bella earned the title of "Coolest Wife Ever" for that one! GAH...that was so insanely hot and by that, I mean EVERYTHING! Thanks for that lovely bit of smutty goodness and I hope you have a very Merry Christmas :)
SLegend chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
Just what I wanted! How did you know? lol Loved it! Thanks!
wheather79 chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
Holy hotness hell! Loved it! ;)
kazbar65 chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
OMG! Now that is a present I want standing by my Christmas tree. One of the most beautifully written and executed ménage I have read. Bought back many memories of my own from a life long past.

The feelings and emotions are so correct, so right, so free, so loving. Brilliant and thank you. A lovely wake up read to start my day.
carebear309 chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
What a nice wife he has ;)But it's nice to hear that all he needs is his wife and for him to tell her that. Must make Bella feel good.
montannaleigh chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
oh my...*fans self*

awesome awesome oneshot! lol :)
msashlyjudd8 chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
Wow. *fanning herself* That was freaking hot. Great job.
insanemum chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
God - that was insanely hot. I don't know how you do it - but I'm sure glad you do. Merry Christmas - and thanks for giving us all such a steamy present!
sleepyjo chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
Ah nice. Why don't more people DO this?

I'da brung him back though. Poly is good :)
obsmama chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
That was so well done I am so happy you left it with he got the fantasy but he had what he needed and now wanted fuck hot threesomes are #win to read for sure but you created a love story within to that I loved no broken promises or hearts J could see their love and that was so sweet.
sarahlouise80 chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
that was fab loved it.
Bee's Bookshelf chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
HOLY FUCK! THAT WAS HOT! I sure as Hell wish I'd get a gift like that! Daaaammmmnnn!

After that, I wish I could give you a gift! But I'll have to settle for telling you HAPPY HOLIDAYS!
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