Reviews for The Greatest Gift of All
TheRugbymom chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
very nicely done!

not squicky at all!
Cat Named Easter chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
. Not only was that incredibly hot, is was also tenderly moving. To see that they love each other so much that they're willing to do anything to please the other...not to mention the amazing sex. This story was the perfect Christmas gift! Excellent as always!
robownsme chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
I can't even express to you how fucking hot that was! I usually can't stand Bella anywhere near Edward and Jasper, but you made it so perfect and dare I say loving, I didn't even mind her being there. It actually made it better. Just from reading your summary, I had a huge smile on my face and you did not disappoint. This was the absolute perfect Christmas present for us, and I can't thank you enough. You are so totally my hero right now. :)
Lisa-FanFicCrazy chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
Sweet but HOT.. Kinda mean making E think he cheated in bathroom at work! LOL
Scarlet Nite chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
The description made me think it was just going to be hot smut (and it was) but it was actually really beautiful and love affirming. Bella could have been the type of wife that is threatened by her husband's attraction to Jasper, but she gave him the gift of trust and acceptance when she arranged his "gift". Well written and appreciated. Happy Holidays!
kezcullen chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
i am usually not one for slash, but this is gorgeous- not a word that i would first think of for a story like this.

beautifully written, with an excellent ending, which is so true in a story which really acts like what it describes- a fantasy. and so often the fantasy doesn't translate to reality as well as one may think.

love it. love it. love it.

masterful writing.
Twilightlvr1 chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
I have to say that I really enjoyed this. I thought you did an excellent job being sensitive to the fact that Bella and Edward are a married couple and in love. We definitly felt Edward's love for his wife and his concern over her being ok with everything. And do I have to even say how hot the lemon was? Wow - think I need a fan after that!
deenerneener chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
Aww. What a nice wife. And what a thoughtful husband, to let her share.

And how fortunate Jasper was sufficiently interested to participate with both of them.

Happy holidays, indeed!

Thanks for writing.
uramazing chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
Great story.
theonlykyla chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
delicious! You never fail to please me:) Fantasy come true!
ilovealion chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
I do not read slash, but your summary had me intrigued. Why would a wife give "that" as a gift? Well, your story explained it perfectly. I am a little surprised to say that I like this story...a lot. It is very sexy, but sweet. You are an awesome writer to pull that off! I mean, to write a threesome where the reader leaves with the absolute knowledge that the act was about LOVE and not just sex/experimentation or debauchery. I didn't feel "dirty" at the end...at all.

Thanks for writing & and Happy Holidays.
ECis4Me chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
My gawd. That's one I'll definitely read again when I need something fukhawt.

As always, you insert the deep rooted passion and eternal love these two have for each other into your 've taken XXX p0rn and made it a love story. *sigh* nice job.

-Tyra
ilovealion chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
I do not read slash, but your summary had me intrigued. Why would a wife give "that" as a gift? Well, your story explained it perfectly. I am a little surprised to say that I like this story...a lot. It is very sexy, but sweet. You are an awesome writer to pull that off! I mean, to write a threesome where the reader leaves with the absolute knowledge that the act was about LOVE and not just sex/experimentation or debauchery. I didn't feel "dirty" at the end...at all.

Thanks for writing & and Happy Holidays.
Succubus630 chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
And I have to go masturbate now...mother of god that was probably in the top 5 of sensual threesomes I've ever read...so good...
MarchHare5 chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
That was so effing hot, and so incredibly sweet and tender. Amazing.
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