Reviews for The Exiles: The Battle For Camelot
Soy YO-SARIEL chapter 7 . 10/5/2014
ESTA COSA ES HERMOSA!
YO HUBIERA DADO MUCHO POR ESTE FINAL
Y NO ...
BUENO
GRACIAS
Guest chapter 6 . 9/18/2014
interesting. The evil queen and snow white are one and the same.
Guest chapter 5 . 9/18/2014
Way to go Merlin! Finally. He executes Morgause with intent.
cindy4651 chapter 7 . 7/18/2014
Just fantastic. Thanks.
cindy4651 chapter 6 . 7/18/2014
Nice sentiment for putting the sword in the stone. Great chapter all around! Thank you!
cindy4651 chapter 4 . 7/18/2014
"Accelerated the spell." He turned back to Gwen. "Sorry, you're a day older."

Awesome!
cindy4651 chapter 3 . 7/18/2014
Great chapter as always!

"trying not to let the thought that had been plaguing his sub-conscious for days manifest itself.

It demanded to know, like many parents before him, just where had he gone so wrong.". Gee, that's been heavily on my mind for the past few months as well, though nowhere near that bad!
LinBates chapter 7 . 10/6/2013
GREAT!
Lilybet chapter 7 . 8/10/2012
That was very Snow White of you, putting Morgana in a crystal. Interesting dynamics between Merlin and Arthur. Good interpretation of the episode within your plotline. LB
Evil-Muffin-ator chapter 7 . 6/12/2011
I have to say, I love the idea of having the armour hanging in midair in a cave, that imagery is just so cool xD
Rilain chapter 1 . 4/5/2011
Loved this story! Thought it was very well written, and enjoyed how it meshed with the show.
sesshouluver chapter 7 . 1/5/2011
awwwwwwwwww adorable ending! Awesome story as per usual! Can't wait for more on this theme!
Militantdelusionalist chapter 7 . 1/5/2011
Oops, didn't realize that this was the last chapter, so I just wanted to say that I really loved the story and I hope to see more of this verse.

As to the Merlin crying on Arthur thing, I think you've been clear that this is going to be A/G (unless not and PLEASE feel free to correct me). However, Merlin's been through A LOT! Like more then one person could realistically handle without having a breakdown. I think Arthur is someone he can truly trust, so him finally breaking down by crying on Arthur's shoulder seems IC to me. Even with EVERYTHING that he's done, I still believe he couldn't really let go without knowing how Arthur felt about everything. Plus they're best friends, and guys SHOULD be allowed to have a cry over things when they become really bad and not seem to be OOC.

Sorry its a bit of a pet peeve of mine and I was so happy to see you write it the way you did. :D

-MD (apparently you can only review once per chapter. :/
Militant Delusionalist chapter 7 . 1/4/2011
:3 Merlin angst, comforting Arthur. :3 I've pretty much melted into a puddle of fangirl goo. That was a great chapter to wrap up the S3 finale. Poor Merlin though. I like that insight Gaius had. Arthur and Merlin really need to work together to share the burden. I think its smart that Arthur be Prince Reagent instead of King. It would be way too much change at the moment. I actually can't believe I forgot about Merlin's death sentence, but I'm glad you didn't and got that all cleared up. :) Can't wait to read more! Very excited since this is all you now. :D
Xierroh chapter 7 . 1/4/2011
Awesome story! Though I found that the part where Merlin was crying on Arthur to be a bit OOC. Other than that, great story! I look forward to more stories in the future! :D
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