Reviews for To You I Surrender
backstagespotlight chapter 1 . 12/20/2010
Hi, me again... I really think you need to stop putting up new stories until you've fixed the ones you already posted. if you post too many like these, people won't take you seriously and you will lack an intelligent audience. Get a beta reader, take time and make your structure as amazing as your imagination.
LindsayMesser chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
great story!