Reviews for River
7gifts chapter 3 . 9/12/2013
I like your writing; it has a way of drawing the reader in.
7gifts chapter 1 . 9/12/2013
I like the premise you set here, it makes sense that Vetty would be knocked for six about Daniel's feelings even when confronted by them. Interesting and intriguing start by the way.
karavinemarinas chapter 3 . 8/15/2013
Nice work, Update more soon please...Thanks!
Optimistic chapter 1 . 12/8/2012
Wonderfully described. You know the characters so well:)
nina.v.johnson chapter 3 . 10/14/2012
Wow. This was really great!
meemalee chapter 3 . 5/29/2012
This is incredible. Why are there not 100s of glowing reviews? Seriously, breathtakingly beautiful and so, so believable.

I keep changing my mind as to which part is my favourite, but I think this encapsulates their relationship perfectly:

'"Whoa." Daniel caught her, his hand closing over the top of her head. "Be careful." She glanced back to realize that he'd just kept her from whacking against the glass edge of his coffee table.

This protective gesture, small as it was, warmed her heart all over again. Betty repeated, "I love you, Daniel. So much."

He had the most amazing, endearing, lopsided smile. "God, I hope this isn't some kind of Christmas-ghost-vision thing. Like in the movies. The Ghost of Christmas You Only Wish." '

Thank you, thank you, thank you.
Elliesmeow chapter 3 . 5/22/2012
That was great! I'm glad they cleared things up between them and Betty was her usual charge-right-in self before the end. Thanks for posting.:)
M chapter 3 . 9/29/2011
Great story, enjoyed every word : )
dyeyell chapter 3 . 9/9/2011
This story sets the standard for post finale fan fiction. I'm a huge detty shipper, but I hate reading about them after they've gotten together (I guess nothing can compare to actually seeing it). Yet, this story makes me want to read more about their romance, and this version of Daniel is pretty hot. You really know how to weave a tale and I can't wait for more.
marielgm22 chapter 3 . 2/8/2011
Oh c'mon! I neeed more, What a wonderful story! Just a few chapters, please!

Great story!
cookie-dough chapter 3 . 12/28/2010
This was great, I loved the way you told this story. It was nice to see that Daniel didn't return to the States, but made himself a home in London. I suspect he was still secretly hoping she would change her mind. I thought you captured Betty's character well, she does tend to over analyse things, and the fact it took her so long to realise her feelings, was more believable.
DudeYouJustTotallyStoleMyCar chapter 3 . 12/22/2010
OMG OMG OMG OH MY GOOOOODDD!

I LOOOOOVED this story!

You have no idea how happy you've made me. It's BRILLIANT!

It's definitely become one of my favourite Ugly Betty stories EVER! You are fantastic! Xxx
Pessimistic Romanticist chapter 3 . 12/21/2010
This was really cute, I enjoyed it.
nogooddeedx chapter 3 . 12/21/2010
That was just beautiful 3 x
Delylah chapter 3 . 12/21/2010
This is a lovely story, and it feels right for them. I have you to blame (or thank) for getting me hooked on watching reruns of this show after I read your last story. I had watched the pilot when it originally aired but never followed up on it after that. So, thanks!
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