Reviews for Help Me
hannahcarr1996 chapter 18 . 4/25/2015
Please continue what happens next when does Bella get changed xxx
PassionIsKey chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
You so copied Diamond In The Rough -.-
ImTryingToSwimButItsNotWorking chapter 18 . 12/5/2011
I am reviewing to bring your attention to this story! UPDATE SOON!

mary ali cullen chapter 18 . 10/2/2011
I personally feel like the ending was rushed. Some parts of the rest lost some fluidity but was overall good. A trick to help with that is to act some of the scenes out and seeing what is natural (reactions, motions, staging),or to have others do it. Another is to read it out loud, you will catch alot of your own grammatical errors that way.

Just suggestions, keep up the good work:)
AngelLUV1276 chapter 1 . 9/26/2011
Work on The Secret Mission...
AccountIsDeactivated111 chapter 1 . 9/17/2011
Good start! :)
AngelofDarkness95 chapter 16 . 8/10/2011
that was great i cant wait to read more
misscullenvolturi chapter 16 . 5/17/2011
realy good but no edward and bella
shay chapter 16 . 4/4/2011
love it. it was cute. i love the new rosalie. the bond bella share with the cullen are cute. will she meet the denali. what happen to victria, james, laurent. please have bella go staight into dating edward have her few boyfriends. cause it funny to see how they all will react. will bella begin to develops powers apart from the shield. cause it will be more trouble and she would be able to take on tanya. how does bella know the volturi. when does jacob can he be one of her boyfriend just to pissy of edward and have the overprotective brothers, daddy, mom, mummy sister and anty jane.
LittleLionWoman chapter 16 . 3/27/2011
Dang! I don't even think you could call that a chapter it was just about seven sentences!
ColossalSuperfluousColloquys chapter 16 . 3/26/2011
Pancakes are nice. Just Sayin.
JagGillarEnDamerna chapter 2 . 3/26/2011
dude this looks like its just a not as good remake of diamond in the rough
hopelessromanticgurl chapter 16 . 3/25/2011
Great two chapters! Update soon!
A.R2914 chapter 14 . 2/9/2011
loved this story! its great!
MidnightSeductress13 chapter 14 . 2/6/2011
Loved it. Update soon
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