|Reviews for In Motion|
| beauty12 chapter 9 . 9/8/2013
This story is fantastic really liked it a lot.
| beauty0102 chapter 9 . 7/7/2012
this was great liked it alot.
| Jacen200015 chapter 9 . 5/29/2012
Nice, very nice. :)
| Laelwen chapter 9 . 5/27/2012
Lol is it weird that the thought of little whiny Anakin *would* be my worst nightmare? Twelve years of *that* before he gets to be Star-Wars-the-Clone-Wars decent...
So glad Xanatos lived though!
| Charisasori chapter 9 . 5/27/2012
Well, this was fantastic. The entire story, I mean. I would love to see what Xanatos and Obi-wan try to do to save Anakin and change his visions. I hope that their efforts to change the future work. It was a bit of bittersweet ending, but the way you ended it had my mind conjuring up different ways of how the future, Anakin, the Jedi, Xanatos, Obi-wan, and the others will turn out. I hope it goes well for them. :-) It's been a pleasure following this story.
Are there any plans for a sequel? :-)
| LianneZ4 chapter 8 . 5/23/2012
Aawww, lovely! I've been waiting for an update for this, and I've almost lost hope... I love what you've done with Qui-GOn here, and with Xanatos. Beautiful!
I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.
| Laelwen chapter 8 . 5/21/2012
He lives, he LIVES! Epic update is epic!
| Kitty9167 chapter 7 . 2/26/2012
Your not gonna kill Xani are you? O.O please update soon so we find out what happens. this is now one of my fav fics! :)
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| Laelwen chapter 7 . 9/15/2011
I'm sure it's very poetic with Xanatos dying but I can't help hoping he somehow makes it...
| Charisasori chapter 7 . 9/3/2011
*does a happy dance* An update! It's an update! *keeps dancing*
...Okay. I think I'm done. Onto the review:
This entire story is amazing. I love the plot. I also love the fact that you decided to redeem Xanatos. I also like the way you went about doing it (I love Charles Dickens!).
However...*gets down on knees* Please, please, please don't kill him! *puppy eyes* Please?
Eagerly awaiting your next update,
| Darth Keyara chapter 7 . 9/3/2011
Ack! So glad you finally updated! Please don't kill off Xanatos...he's too awesome to die. Eagerly awaiting the next update!
| Darth Keyara chapter 6 . 5/5/2011
Very fascinating rewriting of Jedi Apprentice. Please continue soon? I 3 Xanatos!
| Scfilover chapter 6 . 3/20/2011
I like how Xanatos wants to do good but is being practical about it - "Apparently you still need somebody to save you from your rash decisions" ;) It's good to see him caring about Obi-Wan: Obi-Wan needs it. Hopefully all three of them will be okay after that explosion! I'm wondering if Qui-Gon is noticing Xanatos focus on Obi-Wan and hopefully he'll correctly understand why.
| LianneZ4 chapter 6 . 3/19/2011
This gets more and more interesting :) I like it :)
| Scfilover chapter 5 . 3/13/2011
I liked the conversation between Xanatos and Yoda a lot: Obi-Wan feeling unwanted never sat well with me. Xanatos is working hard to get Qui-Gon's trust...you said the path won't be easy...I look forward to seeing what is next :)