Reviews for A Wedding?
Mach the Slewfoot chapter 1 . 7/20/2015
A very simple and well-written wedding story. My only criticism is the addition of lyrics. The lyrics only distract the reader and hinder the story's quality (in other words, they are unnecessary). The story is strong enough to stand on its own without lyrics.

The Warty Hogg chapter 1 . 7/20/2015
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sharon.suez chapter 1 . 4/14/2015
I love Jenny and Pete being married. I'm happy for Sadie, also. I hope, Jenny and Pete have children.
Mina64 chapter 1 . 6/20/2012
Hi, I'm new and just wanted to say that I LOVE the whole Pete and Jenny love story and look forward to more in the future! After all we need to know if Jenny's dad will skulk into their lives.
ssabl chapter 1 . 1/12/2011
Finally a wedding, I was getting worried that this relationship was all over. Wonderfully written I could imagine that Pete would be persistent when it came to choosing his wife, after all he has waited a long time.

The characters are again written with the passion of a dedicated author. Thank you again and looking forward to possible future stories with these characters.

ladybuguab chapter 1 . 12/22/2010
I really enjoyed this. It may have been short, but it was perfect. With the mention of her father and the problems he could cause, does that mean that you are going to continue this storyline? I sure hope so.

Thanks for sharing and Merry Christmas.