Reviews for Fallen Angels
loup-garou-gurl chapter 1 . 12/31/2011
i like the plot, but you should make it more longer. (sorry, poor grammer.)
Amity Verity Fortunato chapter 1 . 12/21/2010
wow! love it.
In-A-New-York-State-Of-Mind chapter 1 . 12/21/2010
Awesomeness! You has heard from me! :) Flippin awesomeness man. Flippin. Awesome. Ness. :) You are doin awes-great! (I Think i almost over uses awesome...XD)
avelinette chapter 1 . 12/20/2010
Cool idea. . .
angelborn inhelll chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
L. O. V. E. Love the story! I didn't read it before.
Bigtimebooks chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
I really like it, the voice as a guide is a very good idea. But since your going to add heaven in there you might have to do a little research to have a good story. I don't have any complaints yet, but the chapter is kinda shorrt. Don't worry because most of them are, just make sure they get longer. Also I dont think Max would handle being an Angel as good as she is already. Also make sure that you really read up on what your writing! You don't want an ofencive story to religon, its a very touchy subjet. Update! ~BTB