Reviews for Kuki's Long Lost Brother
Madison chapter 8 . 3/1/2014
I really like this story I think it was kinda weird that ace likes Wally that's kinda really creepy but it was a good story.
revengefrank chapter 1 . 4/23/2011
i love it great stories
cartoonlover03 chapter 8 . 4/23/2011
HEYY.. IF no one has done it. i would like to do the sequel. :) but i have to finish meh story in progress.
Written Angel chapter 8 . 3/19/2011
D'aww love it! Please update soon!
KNDnumbuh007 chapter 8 . 3/19/2011
awww wally... at least she stopped James right?
imasmurf93 chapter 8 . 3/19/2011
Great story, I demand a sequel :-P x
Written Angel chapter 7 . 2/17/2011
Ep! What hapened! I REEEEEEAALLLLYYY WANT TO KNOW! Please update soon!
imasmurf93 chapter 7 . 2/14/2011
Whoa, not Kuki?

Uh ih! I wannt know who it is now! Update soon x
KNDnumbuh007 chapter 7 . 2/14/2011
Omg it's James Truman in disguise! But wouldn't that make him gay? Du du du duuu look out it's batman (Wally) and robin (James)! Lol updat soon
imasmurf93 chapter 6 . 2/5/2011
Nooo! Wally save her!

update soon x
KNDnumbuh007 chapter 6 . 2/4/2011
Lol where'd the quicksand come from haha! Update soon so Wally can forgive for his mistake

Wally: I said I was sorry!

Kuki: whatever...

Oh boy... Update soon!
TAZ chapter 5 . 1/29/2011
okay, a little advice, make sentences a little longer. add a few more details. but it's good so far. now, what i think should happen is that they fall asleep in the cave, James Truman comes in the cave and is just about to kill wally because he had his arm rested on her. kuki wakes up, was able to stop james. James says he want her back, she says that he has to be put to rest, they find the body, bury it and he's off their hands for good. wally tries to tell kuki that he loves her, he cuts himself off, and tries to walk away. kuki grabs his hand, pulls him to her, kisses him. ace comes and kidnaps kuki and they have to save her, then James truman comes back from the dead... again, kills Ace, saves kuki and finally rests in peace. happy ending, lalalala
imasmurf93 chapter 5 . 1/27/2011
awww sweetm upsate soon :-) x
KNDnumbuh007 chapter 5 . 1/27/2011
It was kind of fast paced but other then that it was fine! Update soon!
MXV chapter 3 . 1/15/2011
OMG!. This story is soo scary!. But, I get scared easily . But great story so far. -Nani ]
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