|Reviews for How It Came To Be|
| mochiusagi chapter 8 . 5/6/2011
Awwww Sakura is adorable! But I feel really bad for er aice she has insomnia. Please update soon!
| Sunny side of cookies chapter 8 . 5/6/2011
Well shoot, this is cute :)
I expected Siax to be the maniac :3
But this is a nice twist, Marluxia usually isn't one of the bad guys :)
I really like this plot! But sometimes your writing is just a little awkward. I'm not sure how to explain this, but what they characters do/say/react isn't really realistic or believable. I have trouble with that too, but luckily I have my sister to look over it and help me out . So maybe just havin someone read over it? That usually helps because they can catch things that you might not.
Other than that, I just noticed really small errors. Like using they're instead of their, or using you're instead of your. And sometimes there are sentences where there should be a comma, but there isn't. Nothing bad though. It doesn't make this unbearable. (Not thatthis story is unbearable, in all actuality, it's awesome :D)
Again, I really like this story, I think it's the cutest idea ever :D I love this because usually I read the ending of a story/book to see if the ending is satisfactory. If it isn't, I don't read it. But since I know (kind of) how it ends, I'm really excited to see how this works out :)
Update soon :)
| mochiusagi chapter 7 . 4/6/2011
Hahaha I love how demyx dash to the mirror to fix his hair. It's really cute how axel 'subtly' fliers with roxas. please update soon!
| Emiz chapter 6 . 2/3/2011
Ahh! Sorry for not reviewing the last chapter sooner. 3 Was so caught up in school... AND YES YOU GET VIRTUAL CUPCAKES! You get donuts if you update soon again! :D
| miss atari chapter 6 . 2/3/2011
awh, axel saved roxas
i'd be a little weirded out if i had someone tell me to trust someone, especially if they were dead. haha.
| Grellexiting chapter 5 . 1/28/2011
OMNOMNOM I WANNA SEE MORE OF SUPER-DUPER-MEGA-ULTRA-BOMBA-KABOSCH-DANGEROUS-TERRA-DADDY!
No, btu srsly, I'm craving this right now... Please, update soon?
| Sasunarufreek chapter 5 . 1/28/2011
I liked it a lot i want to no who killed Ven rawer can't wait for next chappy
| ScorchedXxXRoses chapter 4 . 1/23/2011
I can't wait for the next chapter! :D
| Emiz chapter 4 . 1/15/2011
Previous comment of mine was actually for this chapter. I had all chapters open and ended up reviewing chapter 2 accidentally. BUT NONE THE LESS, UPDATE AND CUPCAKES WILL BE GIVEN! :D
| Emiz chapter 2 . 1/15/2011
Continue and I give you cupcakes. :)
| drama50 chapter 3 . 12/29/2010
God I love this story! Quick question though, are there two Demyx's? You mention him as Axel and Roxas' child then in the flashback? Thank you! And please keep writing!
| UsagiPyon60 chapter 1 . 12/20/2010
sounds interesting, I can't wait till more, yes :3