Reviews for Sundown
susan.durnil chapter 1 . 12/1/2016
This story, which you wrote years ago now, has some issues with mechanics - noun/verb tense agreement, little things, really - but it made me cry. Editors can fix mechanics. Only writers can come up with the ideas and put the words down.
Elise Deschat chapter 1 . 5/27/2016
Sweet story...I particularly liked the ones involving Michele...but I think that her words would have been "Je t'aime papa", as she in the final episode she was either speaking French or Vietnamese...
PamSB chapter 1 . 6/15/2014
Abby: Thank you for this beautiful and heartfelt epilogue to Michelle and Thomas!
PBIceCream chapter 1 . 5/25/2013
That was incredibly touching and beautiful, thank you!
everlovin chapter 1 . 7/3/2012
Lovely story! Thanks for sharing!
Karen19 chapter 1 . 1/6/2011
ah, I liked this story.
robspace54 chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
I think that you have captured what TM would have been feeling exactly. The sentiments are well writtenn and well thought out. Good job.