Reviews for Timetraveling Faol
readinggrrl chapter 1 . 7/10/2012
This story absolulely sucks. Learn to tell a coherent story before you post again.
AriannaSmith-WhiteWolf chapter 1 . 3/7/2011
Jamie Fraser only comes into the story only once and he doesn't show up until the girls go back. Jessica falls in love with a Highlander while Arianna falls in love with a German soldier.

Jamie only appears once in the story or maybe a bit more.
Molly chapter 1 . 3/1/2011
This story is extremely confusing...I am very lost. Are you trying to take on the voice and mind of a young girl by writing in this choppy and incoherent manner? Because it is working very well. I barely understand how Jamie even comes into this story.
Kayyyyy chapter 1 . 12/28/2010
So, this is a bit confusing and choppy, but I looooove Jamie acting as a sort of guardian angel :) I can't believe there isn't more outlander fic!