|Reviews for a brother tale|
| Jazzfan0217 chapter 1 . 11/25/2013
Other than some grammar issues I think the story's theme you had going was fantastic! :D Wish you could have made it longer.
| Psycho Tangerine chapter 1 . 5/18/2013
You have a really nice story. I can see Mike being a bit overprotective of Leo. My suggestion, if you are still interested in becoming a writer, is to work on your grammar and spelling (or get someone to help with that). Anyway keep on writing and good luck with it.
| fruits.baskets1 chapter 1 . 9/29/2012
HOPE YOU ADD MORE CHAPTERS TO A BROTHER'S TALE PLEASE
| bubblegum92 chapter 1 . 12/21/2010
some sellping and grammer are bad bur over all an good story well done