Reviews for Typical Day at the Hakurei Shrine
Asellus111 chapter 1 . 12/22/2010
ja! funny as hell I don't know if Marisa is really lucky or not... good work
HunterBravoLima chapter 1 . 12/21/2010
I really liked this little story. Uh, sorry I can't offer like literary criticism cause I'm bad at that... but I can tell you the reader experience was good.
Anonymous Pyramid Head chapter 1 . 12/20/2010
This was a pretty short and bitter-sweet take on Gensokyo's #1 beloved futanari, er, I mean pimp~

It must be tough for Pimprisa to be caught in this 'love square' she set herself up to...

Then again, with the recent releases of games after Touhou 7, that square is now an octagon~

Haha, good job...You should do more of these...

*notices author's avatar*

Maybe one staring Kaguya and Mokou...And Keine and Eirin~
Exilo chapter 1 . 12/20/2010
Lol - typical day indeed. I love Aya's part at the end. XDDD

Are you only planning to keep this story as a one-shot though? I think it could really develop into more than just one chapter. Like, why don't you try to add in a prequel or a sequel or related to back up the main plot of this one-shot?

Overall it's good, no mistakes are maken during the writing which is awesome.

Well, take your time to think about it, okay?

Good luck with your future work. D d()b