|Reviews for Shh|
| Zoser chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
Engrossing story, good work!
| gatehead81 chapter 1 . 12/29/2010
ie iei ie! what a story!
loved the technical detail and the bone ragged rawness.
8 bullets, 8 enemies, one silent colonel and one kick-ass determined major. All the elements for a top quality story, only one thing left - a skilled writer to put it all together ... Mission success :)
A second half would be good, maybe they could meet up with Teal'c and Daniel, that would definitely improve their odds and ensure their escape...
Keep 'em comin :)
| BettyHall223 chapter 1 . 12/22/2010
Very good story. Hope to read more from you.
| dpdp chapter 1 . 12/20/2010
| i.m. nell chapter 1 . 12/20/2010
Bravo on your first Stargate story. You conveyed well the sense of desperation, dread and despondency that Sam was experiencing. I didn't even see it coming that Jack was still alive and in good form as usual. Glad I gave this a try because your story description kind of scared me. I like action, adventure, and suspense but I'm a romantic and always want Sam and Jack to have a happy and loving relationship. Your story's ending gives some hope after all they now have a staff weapon!
| polrobin chapter 1 . 12/20/2010
"he ghastly thought crossed her mind that this is what it feels like to die inside."
Yeah, I'm thinkin' you have the whole angst thing down!
| megmeyer chapter 1 . 12/20/2010
It really doesn't feel like it is finished! Very well written, and I really liked your Jack and Sam. Very in character. I would certainly be interested in how they get by the rest of the Jaffa (because we know they will)!
| sgo chapter 1 . 12/20/2010
You did a great job. You captured the characters perfectly. The only thing wrong with this story is it wasn't longer. Can't wait to read your next one.
| EwigeStudentin chapter 1 . 12/20/2010
Yowza! "Unpracticed author"? "Results not guaranteed"? I tell you what, that piece is one of the finest I've ever read! And not just because I happen to know the companion drawing ;) It's so... full of raw emotion. I think I held my breath together with Sam!
I so love your Jack and Sam. Your Jack is too funny, and Carter's instincts are spot on.
"Are you saying that I'm fat?" - LOL! So glad you made them (and us) laugh in the middle of such a situation!
I honestly wouldn't have guessed the ending! But I agree with Jack, they are in advantage now. After that scary detail about 8 Jaffa and 8 rounds left, I was sorta prepared for Carter boring the enemy to death with her superhuman knowledge of astrophysics :)
What a treat! Thank you for sharing!
| mia66 chapter 1 . 12/20/2010
No way you are leaving it at that! No way, give us another chapter...please'
You did awesome