Reviews for The Invisible Servant
mersan123 chapter 12 . 2/26
Hey, a little late in reading the story but I do love finding these gems! Love the idea of an invisible Merlin - priceless.
Loved the story. A wonderful blend of adventure, bromance, angst and humour. I have to say though, my favourite scene had to be the rather steamy kiss between Merlin and Morgana - yeah. Sigh.
Thanks again. Excellent read.
MoonlightMystery13.3 chapter 6 . 12/29/2014
Hmmmm, I'm trying to figure out just how I feel about this strange twist... Eh, no, I can't say I really like the way this is going. I promise I'll finish the story though, and there'll probably be another review before I'm done reading. It is an interesting angle, but it just feels wrong to me. I bet it was kind of fun to write, though. I can't wait to read more of your stories!
Bye for now,
MM13.3
Guest chapter 2 . 11/6/2014
Wonderful reveal!
Linorien chapter 12 . 6/29/2014
Fantastic! I just love Merlin's little invisibility spell.
Linorien chapter 1 . 6/29/2014
Seriously Merlin, you really should've put some enchantment over it to prevent just that form happening.
wryter501 chapter 6 . 3/29/2014
great idea, taking this from merlin' pov - having seen that arthur's a bit intimidated of merlin, we're reminded that merlin's also a bit intimidated of arthur...
oh, i did wonder about that flicker - oh, merlin. and as always, he choses what to obey and how to obey...
i do like that arthur stayed to confront merlin - i was afraid he was going to pretend like he never saw it and it was going to become this thing between them...
wryter501 chapter 5 . 3/29/2014
i like 'pet wolf' for merlin - tame and yet wild...
this is exactly what i missed from the series leaving the reveal so late... arthur adjusting to a new concept of merlin. i love those little moments when it's just slightly off to him. and interesting that arthur and merlin disagree on how to use the magic, and arthur steps right into giving orders... most fics i've read have it the reverse, that arthur allows merlin to decide based on his expertise with magic...
arthur knowing he can give merlin commands that he cannot force him to obey, but that merlin will choose to obey... that's a shift, there. strong stuff. it's the gist of it though, really - you don't outrank him anymore.
and oh dear what a twist. merlin and morgana.
wryter501 chapter 2 . 3/29/2014
nice thought process for arthur - what if all magic was eradicated within the kingdom, what then? how vulnerable it would be... and each of these events, to have reasoned them out... and merlin, powerful but adorably sheepish at the same time - sorry, it's just me. :)
wryter501 chapter 1 . 3/29/2014
i love arthur seeing merlin more clearly - the good attribues, and the ones he thinks might not be so good (sorcery? merlin?) i like him reacting to merlin's expression like there's an enemy behind him - and then it's morgana. and i absolutely love the chapter title - loose floorboard in their relationship too, if i'm not mistaken? :)
Kurumi Uchiha chapter 12 . 3/18/2014
This story was amazing!
That revelation thing at the end... just perfect!
You did an incredible thing with the relationship between Arthur and Merlin. Both of them using magic in Camelot? EPIC.
I enjoyed every part of it and it was wonderfully writen. Thank you!
Haldir639 chapter 12 . 1/16/2014
Excellent fic!
Morgana 632 chapter 12 . 12/18/2013
WOW! I really like this it's good larh... Write more PLEASE...
AJsRandom chapter 12 . 12/15/2013
A very fun (and funny) ride. Thanks! :)
StormQueen6711 chapter 12 . 12/6/2013
NO! i might just go read King Arthur's Ward again, been a while! :D
The Misty Jewel chapter 12 . 11/17/2013
lol Wonderful fic!
Absolutely fantastic! I just loved it. Arthur should have figured out Merlin had magic by season 3, at the LATEST. I'm sure most people agree.
Although it IS very funny when Merlin casts a spell on Arthur, and Arthur has no idea who cast it. And Merlin just stands there, getting his revenge. :)
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