Reviews for The Invisible Servant
nonstop19 chapter 5 . 4/23
...What? I really confused. I don't understand! AGH!
nonstop19 chapter 3 . 4/23
LEON! NO!
The-Hunters-Girl chapter 4 . 3/21
Woops sorry. Talk about typos and time lines! I ment to say chapter 3 is where you killed off Sir Leon and then he is in Chapter 4! Anyways... I really liked the story. It was a different read and a fun story to get swept away in.
The-Hunters-Girl chapter 3 . 3/21
I really liked your story but is chapter 3 a flash back? You killed off Sir Leon at the end of chapter 2 and then he is holding a sword on Merlin in chapter 3. Just curious if that was a typo of if I missed a shift in the time line.
poonpeiyun chapter 12 . 12/11/2015
This is actually quite good! I was so shocked by the reviews that i almost didn't read it... I really think that is how arthur will act and respond after all the revealations. It's a great story!
Guest chapter 7 . 11/27/2015
I AM GOING TO STOP READING THIS PIECE OF SHIT. ARTHUR IS AN ARROGANT BASTARD WHO DOESN'T KNOW THE MEANING OF EQUALITY. HIS STATUS IS HIS POWER, BUT MERLIN'S STATUS AS EMRYS IS HIS AND TO ORDER HIM ABOUT, TO TELL HIM TO OBEY WITHOUT THOUGHT OR HESITANCE IS LIKE TRAINING HIM TO BE A WEAPON, NOT AN ADVISOR. YOUR ARTHUR IS A BASTARD ASSHOLE.
mizzymel chapter 12 . 11/7/2015
Did this story move forward in time at all? It's a bit confusing as in the previous chapter Arthur was Regent and in the next chapter he's King and Uther is gone with no explanation and nothing cementing the timeline.
Guest chapter 5 . 7/7/2015
I don't like how Arthur is ORDERING Merlin to do magic. And he thought 'tame sorcerer' almost as if he's chained Merlin to him. Nowhere do ee see epiphanies of how much Merlin has done for him, how loyal he is. Unappreciated Merlin.. cannot read.
mersan123 chapter 12 . 2/26/2015
Hey, a little late in reading the story but I do love finding these gems! Love the idea of an invisible Merlin - priceless.
Loved the story. A wonderful blend of adventure, bromance, angst and humour. I have to say though, my favourite scene had to be the rather steamy kiss between Merlin and Morgana - yeah. Sigh.
Thanks again. Excellent read.
MoonlightMystery13.3 chapter 6 . 12/29/2014
Hmmmm, I'm trying to figure out just how I feel about this strange twist... Eh, no, I can't say I really like the way this is going. I promise I'll finish the story though, and there'll probably be another review before I'm done reading. It is an interesting angle, but it just feels wrong to me. I bet it was kind of fun to write, though. I can't wait to read more of your stories!
Bye for now,
MM13.3
Guest chapter 2 . 11/6/2014
Wonderful reveal!
Linorien chapter 12 . 6/29/2014
Fantastic! I just love Merlin's little invisibility spell.
Linorien chapter 1 . 6/29/2014
Seriously Merlin, you really should've put some enchantment over it to prevent just that form happening.
wryter501 chapter 6 . 3/29/2014
great idea, taking this from merlin' pov - having seen that arthur's a bit intimidated of merlin, we're reminded that merlin's also a bit intimidated of arthur...
oh, i did wonder about that flicker - oh, merlin. and as always, he choses what to obey and how to obey...
i do like that arthur stayed to confront merlin - i was afraid he was going to pretend like he never saw it and it was going to become this thing between them...
wryter501 chapter 5 . 3/29/2014
i like 'pet wolf' for merlin - tame and yet wild...
this is exactly what i missed from the series leaving the reveal so late... arthur adjusting to a new concept of merlin. i love those little moments when it's just slightly off to him. and interesting that arthur and merlin disagree on how to use the magic, and arthur steps right into giving orders... most fics i've read have it the reverse, that arthur allows merlin to decide based on his expertise with magic...
arthur knowing he can give merlin commands that he cannot force him to obey, but that merlin will choose to obey... that's a shift, there. strong stuff. it's the gist of it though, really - you don't outrank him anymore.
and oh dear what a twist. merlin and morgana.
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