Reviews for Love Hina: Facing Reality
Littica Marek chapter 1 . 8/16/2012
Yukiko Atsuko, are they or are they not married...
Guest chapter 5 . 6/29/2012
we want more and get help with the fighting scenes and you will get better at them
Kuroki94 chapter 5 . 5/24/2012
well this i can see keitaro and oc.. I like n u must know someone cant review for u if u not reappear at page 1,2 or 3 alway update.
Druss the Legend chapter 5 . 5/28/2011
dont give up on this story!

it has all my favorite elements in it...

i am guessing the reason you have not recieved more reviews is that people are waiting for this story to take off...

once all the good stuff start coming in...people will automatically start reviewing...

great work!

ciao!
Major Mike Powell III chapter 5 . 5/27/2011
Well, well, soldier...

(Whistles) This was pretty damn AW3SOME!

But if I remember correctly: if Tsuruko beat Keitaro, then she could join in on the KeiYuki action, right? But she lost! D: Does that mean...no threesome? D:

Please, let me be wrong! DX

Now, the fight itself was simply kickass! The moment K-Man switched to reverse grip...ho-ho! XD Tsu-chan got PWN3D!

N-I-CE work, marine!

Update ASAP! That's an order!

Semper-Fi! Carry on!
Mz340 chapter 5 . 5/27/2011
Yay! an Update.

Tsuruko got Owned! The fight was great even though short, but entense.

Update soon.
SecondSeraphim chapter 4 . 5/14/2011
Aw...update!
Diablo200030002002 chapter 4 . 4/24/2011
Please don;t cacnel thsi story i really love it.

I wanted to see how things worked out adn see what sort of choas would follow.

Please keep up the story really love it and want more.

So far to me youa re doing great with the characters and everything no complaints from me.
Lee48 chapter 4 . 4/19/2011
hey! So far you are doing good writing just keep it up
Fox Boss chapter 4 . 4/19/2011
The reason people probably don't review is because they like it and have nothing to complain about? That's the situation in my case, because your story is defintely good.
Major Mike Powell III chapter 4 . 4/19/2011
Ah...seriously?

(Slides a .405 round into his CheyTac Intervention) You're kidding, right? I was lookin' at my Favorites, and I see this thing "updated", and think to myself: "FINALLY! The lousy, review-whoring basterd FINALLY updated!" and THEN!

I come across THIS. (Very angry face) Shame on you, son!

You'd BETTER NOT quit, marine, you hear me? I don't wanna say "Mission Failed", kid!

Update ASAP, goddamn it! That's an order!

Semper-Fi! Carry on!
Wittmann the Tiger Ace chapter 3 . 4/18/2011
Hey, this is not a flame. you write a great story but the chapters are too short. you leave someone like me going "Is that all that's here?"

I need words, addicted to word. Seriously though, i give 9.8/10. for substance and a 3/10 length.

Please more

pak40
Bagget00 chapter 4 . 4/18/2011
You know, you're right. But let me just say this: When I got an alert in my E-Mail about this fic having a new chapter, I was extreamly excited. That should show how much I like this story. Yes I was a bit lazy in the reviewing department, but please do continue.
that one guy chapter 4 . 4/18/2011
hey just because people don't review doesn't mean they don't like it or don't find it worthy of a review. somepeople are just lazy... or just kinda dropped of the face of the planet... or got social lives. but anyway you really should try to continue the story... i mean really this story is very enjoyable and it's aways nice seeing a perspective where keitaro is with NONE of the girls... anyway please keep it up. and yeah i'll be waiting for your next chap... and maybe i might ACTUALLY use my user name for it(to lazy to login)
kewldudemanwhatevs chapter 3 . 2/3/2011
Oooooh I like it. :D The OC seems sweet and TsurukoxKeitaro was a nice addition. Also, making Keitaro a master swordsman was TIGHT.
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