Reviews for As Our Souls Intertwine
everyday-deeds chapter 1 . 12/20/2010
So I meant to review this, but I had to go to work, and yeah...but this was really sweet. Really sweet. I really liked it. I loved how you take their points of view so well- it's Sheena and Zelos, clearly- and yet poetic! XD And the images you conjured, with the dust and the ashes, really showed how much they both have suffered. I think my favorite was Zelos's stanza, where he said "You are one sin I don't mind having tossed my way". But all of it was wonderful.
mokamon chapter 1 . 12/20/2010
Aww! That was so sweet! I loved all the things they both said. I had a smile on my face the whole time I was reading this. Very adorable Sheelos poem. 3 And I don't think you really need to put the T rating; I wouldn't have thought about the wording that way if you hadn't mentioned anything XD still, very adorable!